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The foggy tenderness a balmy buffer, smiling oblivion decomposes anguish and pain... In frost a cloak to keep you protected: cosset without bruise. I greet you, wheel through space, after initial slumber subsides, and pain kicks in, but not actually, chant words shaped into sentences... A poem of friendship through the days, orbits, spheres, clouds, stars, smiles, and pain... Spring is budding, after snow flowers will blossom, offspring will vault. This too is going to be alright *** Poem by Darren White February 13, 2017

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Date: 2/19/2017 8:15:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem - loved it <3
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Darren White
Date: 2/19/2017 8:18:00 AM
Thanks Claudia, friends sometimes need a little bit extra attention :)
Date: 2/14/2017 7:11:00 AM
A poem of friendship can't think of anything more thoughtful, well written.
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Darren White
Date: 2/14/2017 7:24:00 AM
Sometimes a friend needs a few words of comfort :) Thank you.
Date: 2/13/2017 8:46:00 PM
Beautiful Poem Darren - Love this <3
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Darren White
Date: 2/13/2017 10:58:00 PM
Thanks Sara <3
Date: 2/13/2017 5:19:00 PM
Such a beautiful comforting poem, Darren. Love it.
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Darren White
Date: 2/13/2017 10:55:00 PM
Agnes, thank you :)
Date: 2/13/2017 1:50:00 PM
Like a fairy godmother sprinkling his sleep with soothing balm. Darren, I cannot believe you are so young. What poems will you be gifting us if years to come?
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Darren White
Date: 2/13/2017 10:54:00 PM
My wheelchair can carry me there awfully quick. We three will share the loot.
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Jean Murray
Date: 2/13/2017 7:20:00 PM
Who needs a pot of gold when one has friends like Darren? But if he can manage it, a leprechaun whispered to me once how to reach the end of that rainbow. So expect a call rich boy.
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/13/2017 3:00:00 PM
Maybe he can sprinkle me a pot-o-gold : )
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Darren White
Date: 2/13/2017 1:56:00 PM
Hahaha, fairy godmother, almost missed that one, clever Jean :D
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Darren White
Date: 2/13/2017 1:55:00 PM
Either I am burrning through all my inspiration in one year (hope not LOL) or I will go on like this for years and years.... oh boy! ;)
Date: 2/13/2017 1:18:00 PM
How thoughtful of you to write such a comforting poem for one of the best poets on ps...Lovely Darren.Hope you are doing better dear friend...
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/13/2017 3:01:00 PM
You are too kind...both of you : )
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Darren White
Date: 2/13/2017 1:21:00 PM
I wrote it for my wonderful friend :) Who is indeed one of the best poets here, and who I admire! Thanks Charmaine, also for all your prayers and wishes for me, you have no idea how much I appreciate this <3
Date: 2/13/2017 11:36:00 AM
Very nice ! :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/13/2017 3:02:00 PM
: )
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Darren White
Date: 2/13/2017 11:42:00 AM
Thanks Heidi :)
Date: 2/13/2017 11:25:00 AM
You have written a lovely poem for one the Soup's most compassionate and talented men. I see from his remark below that he appreciates this, Darren. Beautiful! Hugs, Carolyn
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/13/2017 3:02:00 PM
That is so sweet Carolyn : )
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Darren White
Date: 2/13/2017 11:28:00 AM
Thank you, Carolyn :)
Date: 2/13/2017 8:42:00 AM
Thank you my friend...Yes the worries are there in my restless nights. Such a beautiful poem.
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Darren White
Date: 2/13/2017 8:45:00 AM
Yeah, they do, don't they? But friends will be friends will be there :)
Date: 2/13/2017 8:13:00 AM
Deep expressions ... Nicely done ...
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Darren White
Date: 2/13/2017 11:40:00 AM
Thank you, Probir :)

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