For the School

The school I’ve worked for half my teaching years is feeling more
and more the woes of these hard times.  I walk the corridor,
remembering the better days before I felt this new malaise
which lies inside the core of me and matches all too eerily
the atmosphere that permeates this hallway and adheres
to all parts of this school I’ve worked for half my teaching years.

I pray to God I’ll never see the end of this old school.
So many came and went, yet I remain.  I’m someone who’ll
stay put until they close its doors. Ten years now I have walked its floors,
taught students and had fun with them. I hope it’s not a requiem 
I’m writing soon for this dear place, which much like an old friend,
Is apt to pass. . . . I pray to God I’ll never see the end. 


For Carolyn Devonshire's Contest: "The Work You Do"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chachere Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 7:03 PM
teachers and their school can mean much more to them. . then others may know.(: ~Always&Forever
K. Avatar
September 14, 2010 at 12:12 AM
oops I haven't congratulated you yet for this one? Sorry- so here I am congrats!! ^_^ & yup you're right there have been good winners in this contest & super thanks btw for adding that short poem of mine to your faves ^_^ made me smile--- & eep I still owe you email-- hope you're having a great night! hugs nikko :)
Fraser Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 10:46 AM
Andrea, many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest >> James
Roberts Avatar
September 11, 2010 at 8:43 PM
congrats on your win with this great entry
Neels Avatar
September 11, 2010 at 8:49 AM
Many congratulations on your win Andrea, a job that help shape children in adults, love Wilma
Mannan Avatar
September 11, 2010 at 5:26 AM
Many congrats for this win. I can relate to this as I was once a teacher too.
Freeman Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 11:41 PM
Congratulations on your honorable teacher profession Andrea! An also your success in the competition. Agape, Moses
Scripca Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 8:53 PM
Congratulations, teach Andrea, on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest. Ole! :)
Mehta Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 8:09 PM
Congratulations on this win in the contest, Andrea
Brown Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 5:32 PM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest Andrea. Love Carol
Gorelick Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 4:59 PM
Good job Andrea..your right..there is malaise in education now. BG
Haick Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 4:06 PM
I feel as though I'd read this before, Andrea. As usual, it's wonderful! I know they miss you. Congratulations on your win. ..Love, Audrey
Sweetheart Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 3:32 PM
Congrats Andrea on your super win in the Work contest... an amazing poem and a wonderful win to enjoy this happy weekend my friend with luv..
Knop Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 5:03 AM
Wonderful tribute to your school and work, Andrea! I myself taught in Papua New Guinea, Vanuatu and in Germany and Chile for about 14 years and know what you feel and talk about! Wish you best of luck for Carolyn's contest and thanks you for your always kind comments on my work!...Wishing you a great weekend!...Love, Gert
Horsman Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 7:42 AM
wow Andrea, when the school begin to close, we are certainly in trouble., good luck in the contest, Harry
Kapoor Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 9:27 PM
I have posted today as promised a part of that great great Poem The Teacher in the honor of its great great brilliant Poet writer Douglas Malloch and A Teacher i.e you my friend. Hope you would love this great write. Love and best wishes....Ravindra...Andrea Dietrich.
Devonshire Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 8:06 AM
:) Thanks for supporting the contest, Andrea! One of these days we should get together and work on a series of blogs about grammar. You certainly have a handle on it, my friend. Love, Carolyn
Peranteau Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 6:19 AM
A sad yet great entry for Carolyn's contest Andrea ! One of the jobs I have much respect for Andrea is teaching...I pray your cain comes out before the doors close dear poet ! much love, james
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 1:33 AM
soup mail
K. Avatar
September 4, 2010 at 10:55 PM
Maligayang Bati, Andrea!!! well over here it's your birthday already ^_^ super hugs to you!! How's your weekend?? I was also thinking of writing something about school--- I sure do pray with you that you won't see the end of that old school-- it sure would be a shame when that happens-- wish you all the best in the contest and keep on enjoying your day!! hugs hugs hugs-- nikko :)
Kapoor Avatar
September 4, 2010 at 10:13 PM
What a beautiful tribute to your school in this outstanding Poem. A great entry for the contest. What a great coincidence, we are celebrating Teachers Day 5th Sept here in India in the memory of a teacher & most learned late Presi. Dr. Radhakrishnan. I am also reminded of a beautiful Poem I read long back in one American Poetry magazine of 63. I will reproduce it as a gift to a teacher. Besides, my good wishes on your Birthday my friend. Soup mail. Love & best wishes..Ravindra.Andrea D
Sweetheart Avatar
September 4, 2010 at 8:19 PM
Wonderful entry Andrea and good luck in the contest... and ..HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U...HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U ... HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO ANDREA ..THE BESTEST FRIEND IN THE WHOLE WIDE WORLD...HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U ..... Now blow out ALL the candles luv and make a big wish... YEAH....
Austin Avatar
September 4, 2010 at 8:35 AM
My sympathy, Andrea. I worked hard at building a string program in Saginaw, only to see it disintegrate because of hard times. I had to retire early. Love, Dave
La France Avatar
September 4, 2010 at 8:19 AM
Thanks for commenting on my blog. I think this poem is wonderful, you sure captured the love and pain that a teacher feels about a school, best of luck in the contes.. Love Constance
Falotico Avatar
September 4, 2010 at 5:26 AM
Lovely write for contet...I feel your heart in this one... good luck Michael
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