For the Love of Sol

Alluring, beckoning;
brushing each droplet with his tantalising golden touch.

Charmed by his searching warmth,
dewy debutantes
eagerly follow, rising effortlessly from a
field of naive dreams, 
giving their virtue to his
heaven sent heat.

Innocence is lost, as
jewels of youth and inexperience,
kissed by his fiery passion,
levitate in brief rapture then disappear,
mourned only by carefree bare feet on a morning stroll.

Narcissistic, he admires his reflection,
over and over, 
pearlescent on a gossamer haze of 
quivering souls,
replaying the pleasure of a
selfish sacrifice
to satisfy his own thirst.

Unquestioned by nature,
victory is his alone, and though
whispering branches sing softly of
xanadu,
yesterday’s dew knows it never existed.

Zephyrs bring a cool twilight air, laden with tomorrow’s oblation.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/3/2010 5:48:00 PM
Beautifully done, not forced as it could so easily be to get the difficult letters in- this just rolls along with colorful and exciting imagery. I love that second stanza. This is wonderful, Sharon, a real tour de force! Hugs, Kris
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Date: 6/23/2010 3:16:00 PM
Another of your gems being featured Sharon, well done >> James
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Date: 6/23/2010 8:09:00 AM
This is a wonderful piece! Accept my colorful congrats on having this poem featured this week. You are such a nice poet! Please, keep your poetry pens dancing on your poetry pad. I wish you all the best with your writing. Love ~Adeleke~
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Date: 6/21/2010 9:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Sharon. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2010 12:48:00 PM
Beautiful! You did an excelent job with this write. Your flare for words is astounding. Caryl
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Date: 6/4/2010 9:22:00 AM
Awesome acrostic, Sharon! You made it flow beautifully and effortlessly. Fine choices for the challenging X and Z words. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/3/2010 1:32:00 PM
wow, this is amazing, Sharon. Frank knows good poetry when he sees it and his comment to you was very nice! LUv, andrea
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Date: 6/2/2010 2:20:00 AM
this is genius. Beautifully penned and uses the form brilliantly. Best Regards- Paul
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Date: 5/26/2010 9:21:00 AM
Thank you Shirley, that's so kind of you.
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Date: 5/25/2010 12:08:00 PM
Thanks for the great comments everyone :)
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Date: 5/24/2010 8:03:00 PM
OH MY ! LOVE IT I COULD NOT PULL THIS 1 OFF. LOVE YOR STYLE, LOVE YOUR (Y) AND (Z) AND(i) THE MOST . STAY COOL YOUR ABC POEM IS AWESOME,,SKAT
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Date: 5/24/2010 7:58:00 PM
Sharon, you are super. this is interesting and brilliant. (a dime a dozen) enjoyed. You got to keep poet more poems for us dear, always,..p.d.
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Date: 5/24/2010 1:48:00 PM
Girl, you're dealing with this one. I like this! Great job and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 5/24/2010 1:19:00 PM
Terrific ABC Sharon, one of the best ones i have read > a warm welcome to the Soup >> James
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Date: 5/24/2010 6:18:00 AM
btw forgot to mention to you, your reference to Sol here actually inspired me to include it in my double acrostic seen here, Total Eclipse ;)
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Date: 5/24/2010 6:17:00 AM
Hi Sharon ^_^!! Super happy to see you here, and welcome! I loved this write the first time I read it, love it as much reading it again :)..sorry I wasn't able to view your soup mail to me--could you please email me again? I wasn't able to inform you about having those smileys/characters on the subject & not being able to read them...looking forward to reading more of your poems here, I'm sure a lot of soupers will enjoy it as much as I do :)
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Date: 5/23/2010 6:22:00 PM
A wonderful write! I enjoyed the read very much, a well written ABC, you made it look easy. Caryl
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Date: 5/23/2010 12:54:00 PM
brilliant creativity. thank you for showing me something different. you have inspired me to try my hand at writing an ABC.
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Date: 5/23/2010 3:53:00 AM
A very thoughtful poem well penned. Keep it up
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Date: 5/23/2010 3:00:00 AM
oops, sorry. Lesson learned & thanks for the warm welcome.
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