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For the First Time

For the first time I kissed you I knew the sun would shine even in the rain, for the first time I held your hand I knew I was protected from anymore pain. For the first time I saw you I knew I loved you all of my days, for the first time I felt God and I thank him for your ways. For the first time I know the second will be the same. by Jennifer Daetwiler

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/7/2016 3:07:00 AM
Jennifer Daetwiler, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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Date: 4/29/2016 11:42:00 PM
awesome to see this one again, Jennifer. LINDA
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Date: 4/24/2013 8:46:00 AM
The sense of innocence here is wonderfully refreshing. A great job! :)
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Date: 4/24/2013 4:18:00 AM
An excellent write...love the flow here...its nothing like grade school crushes.. :)
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Date: 4/24/2013 4:15:00 AM
- Very sweet poem Jennifer ...... Welcome to P-Soup, you write very well. - (Giving and receiving) Visit other poems and give your comment - and you'll get back. - Continue with your beautiful poem. - Have fun with words and thoughts. - Good luck. - See you again. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/23/2013 10:41:00 PM
Jennifer, Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself! If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it. HUGS <3 from your newest friend ~*~SKAT"
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Date: 4/23/2013 10:04:00 PM
I like this Jennifer, very cute"Welcome to the poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest --called the “7 wonders” I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like, please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far..... Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 4/23/2013 5:12:00 PM
inspired by grade school crushes.....
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