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Joy harnessed from soft internal lightness was pulse promised with attraction’s might and sealed blissful bound by our first kiss … with lips our hearts found their home address Our emotive blessings deafen my questions and ease my perception’s limitations for you are my parceled Eden freedom … our haven structure is couple completion I chose marbled strength upheaval plans that thru change I might someday know your name and realize you like I breathe in nature … no matter your season, it reaps my pleasure
For the first time in my heart’s entire life I’ve no need to incite change thru strife’s design and limp again within my dreams scorched rubble to find my soulmate while my pains struggle
... CayCay October 3, 2019

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Date: 10/25/2019 4:47:00 AM
That is very well written. Congratulations on POTD. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 10/10/2019 12:15:00 PM
Congrat Cay Cay on POTD this is a great write, but we expect nothing less from you. I enjoy your unique perspective, and singular phraseology!
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Date: 10/9/2019 4:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your P.O.T.D. I'm happy for you my friend. Ernilando
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Date: 10/8/2019 7:05:00 AM
Congrats on your POTD, CayCay.
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Date: 10/6/2019 2:12:00 PM
- Beautiful written, CayCay :) -Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/6/2019 8:26:00 AM
Your pen is flowing with golden ink, CayCay, this is so beautiful and touching. Congrats on POTD and best of luck in the contest my friend. Hugs, John
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Date: 10/6/2019 6:17:00 AM
Cay Cay, congratulations on POTD with your heart felt poem!
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Date: 10/6/2019 6:16:00 AM
A beautiful, soulful write. Congrats on your POTD
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Date: 10/5/2019 7:53:00 PM
This is beautiful in every way!! You have placed your whole heart upon the page, and we all can feel these emotions within. Your happiness reaching beyond the sky. I am smiling with you. Congratulations CayCay, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Date: 10/5/2019 2:08:00 PM
Cay Cay - way to go my friend - I applaud your amazing poetry which so deservedly was chosen as POTD breathtaking poem - congratulations - all your poetry rocks, but there is always a ripple of softness, excitement and sensitivity - this one sends tickles of fancy up my spine - With lips our hearts found their home address.....For you are my parcelled Eden freedom.... For the first time in my hearts entire life, I've no need to incite change thru strife's design! - blissful poetry! Hugs, Jenn.
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Date: 10/5/2019 12:47:00 PM
CayCay, congratulations on your poem of the day ~~
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Date: 10/5/2019 10:22:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD CayCay :)
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Date: 10/5/2019 10:07:00 AM
Gosh day at such a heartfelt poem, I welled up reading the final stanza especially. Bravo on potd:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/5/2019 9:31:00 AM
"I’ve no need to incite change thru strife’s design "...Nice...it's over...Congratulations CayCay on POTD
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Date: 10/5/2019 9:27:00 AM
A captivating read! Heartiest congratulations on POTD with this gem, CayCay:-)
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Date: 10/5/2019 8:59:00 AM
Cay Cay, you're getting to be a regular POTDer...Why? because of your magnificent writes...Congrats my friend...next time try to tone it down a bit lol...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 10/5/2019 8:49:00 AM
You captivated this reader from the first line... as well as made me sigh. I love a happy ending. Just beautiful...
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Date: 10/5/2019 7:55:00 AM
congratulations on the POTD CayCay
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Date: 10/5/2019 7:26:00 AM
WoW! Andrea, Your poem and the photo were spot on. You gave the boy a voice, and I can picture him saying what you wrote. Great job. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a great evening:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/5/2019 7:15:00 AM
An, CayCay! Magicician with a pen! Amen and amen. Congratulations! Panagiota oxox 10/5/2019 5:15 am PST
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Date: 10/5/2019 6:12:00 AM
Congrats CayCay on poem of the day...such a lovely write--so well deserved!
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Date: 10/5/2019 4:04:00 AM
Hi CayCay, I'm not surprised that you got such an honor. However, I am delighted for you my friend. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a fantastic weekend:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/5/2019 2:42:00 AM
Beautiful verse CayCay, Connie was spot on with her prediction, a well deserved POTD honour. Congratulations. Tom.
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Date: 10/4/2019 9:23:00 PM
ahhh yes, this is the one I like best tonight of yours!! I will fave it!
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Date: 10/4/2019 8:48:00 PM
caycay, this one just got better and better as I was reading it. I loved the 1st and 4th lines in verse three for their unique imagery. Then I hit verse four and the entire thing was fantastic.Keep that last verse in mind for when Gregory has another of his 4-liner contests!! i sure hope EMile places you.
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