CayCay Godwin Poet Rhyme

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Poem of the Day October 5, 2019 

FOR THE FIRST TIME

Dedicated to Timothy Lee

Joy harnessed from soft internal lightness
was pulse promised with attraction’s might
and sealed blissful bound by our first kiss …
	  with lips our hearts found their home address 

Our emotive blessings deafen my questions
and ease my perception’s limitations
for you are my parceled Eden freedom …
	  our haven structure is couple completion

I chose marbled strength upheaval plans
that thru change I might someday know your name
and realize you like I breathe in nature …
	 no matter your season, it reaps my pleasure

For the first time in my heart’s entire life
I’ve no need to incite change thru strife’s design 
and limp again within my dreams scorched rubble
to find my soulmate while my pains struggle

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Kai Michael Neumann October 25, 2019 at 4:47 AM That is very well written. Congratulations on POTD. Kind wishes, Kai

John Hamilton October 10, 2019 at 12:15 PM Congrat Cay Cay on POTD this is a great write, but we expect nothing less from you. I enjoy your unique perspective, and singular phraseology!

Ernilando Tugaff October 9, 2019 at 4:23 AM Congratulations on your P.O.T.D. I'm happy for you my friend. Ernilando

Line Gauthier October 8, 2019 at 7:05 AM Congrats on your POTD, CayCay.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 6, 2019 at 2:12 PM - Beautiful written, CayCay :) -Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Gondolf October 6, 2019 at 8:26 AM Your pen is flowing with golden ink, CayCay, this is so beautiful and touching. Congrats on POTD and best of luck in the contest my friend. Hugs, John

Tania Kitchin October 6, 2019 at 6:17 AM Cay Cay, congratulations on POTD with your heart felt poem!

Jeanne Mcgee October 6, 2019 at 6:16 AM A beautiful, soulful write. Congrats on your POTD

Brandy Nicole October 5, 2019 at 7:53 PM This is beautiful in every way!! You have placed your whole heart upon the page, and we all can feel these emotions within. Your happiness reaching beyond the sky. I am smiling with you. Congratulations CayCay, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos October 5, 2019 at 2:08 PM Cay Cay - way to go my friend - I applaud your amazing poetry which so deservedly was chosen as POTD breathtaking poem - congratulations - all your poetry rocks, but there is always a ripple of softness, excitement and sensitivity - this one sends tickles of fancy up my spine - With lips our hearts found their home address.....For you are my parcelled Eden freedom.... For the first time in my hearts entire life, I've no need to incite change thru strife's design! - blissful poetry! Hugs, Jenn.

Constance La France October 5, 2019 at 12:47 PM CayCay, congratulations on your poem of the day ~~

Heidi Sands October 5, 2019 at 10:22 AM Congratulations for POTD CayCay :)

Jan Allison October 5, 2019 at 10:07 AM Gosh day at such a heartfelt poem, I welled up reading the final stanza especially. Bravo on potd:-) hugs Jan xx

Arturo Michael October 5, 2019 at 9:31 AM "I’ve no need to incite change thru strife’s design "...Nice...it's over...Congratulations CayCay on POTD

Edward Ibeh October 5, 2019 at 9:27 AM A captivating read! Heartiest congratulations on POTD with this gem, CayCay:-)

Winged Warrior October 5, 2019 at 8:59 AM Cay Cay, you're getting to be a regular POTDer...Why? because of your magnificent writes...Congrats my friend...next time try to tone it down a bit lol...^WW^ :o)

Debra Squyres October 5, 2019 at 8:49 AM You captivated this reader from the first line... as well as made me sigh. I love a happy ending. Just beautiful...

Bobby May October 5, 2019 at 7:55 AM congratulations on the POTD CayCay

Sandra Adams October 5, 2019 at 7:26 AM WoW! Andrea, Your poem and the photo were spot on. You gave the boy a voice, and I can picture him saying what you wrote. Great job. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a great evening:-) Alexis

Panagiota Romios October 5, 2019 at 7:15 AM An, CayCay! Magicician with a pen! Amen and amen. Congratulations! Panagiota oxox 10/5/2019 5:15 am PST

Vijay Pandit October 5, 2019 at 6:12 AM Congrats CayCay on poem of the day...such a lovely write--so well deserved!

Alexis Y. October 5, 2019 at 4:04 AM Hi CayCay, I'm not surprised that you got such an honor. However, I am delighted for you my friend. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a fantastic weekend:-) Alexis

Tom Cunningham October 5, 2019 at 2:42 AM Beautiful verse CayCay, Connie was spot on with her prediction, a well deserved POTD honour. Congratulations. Tom.

Andrea Dietrich October 4, 2019 at 9:23 PM ahhh yes, this is the one I like best tonight of yours!! I will fave it!

Andrea Dietrich October 4, 2019 at 8:48 PM caycay, this one just got better and better as I was reading it. I loved the 1st and 4th lines in verse three for their unique imagery. Then I hit verse four and the entire thing was fantastic.Keep that last verse in mind for when Gregory has another of his 4-liner contests!! i sure hope EMile places you.

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