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For the Dance

for the dance knees ache after all of the years tending floors of oak and ash. scraping through waltz-worn varnish. scents of turps, aged wood float on heat waves above his head. back strained beyond bearing. chandeliers mock the stars bright crystal flames. silks and satins whisper whirling colour kaleidoscope; ceremonial swords softly rattle. dancing slippers guided by dress boots polished to a striking gleam glide smoothly on his floor. music bursts from doors; windows open to the night. voices murmuring, in dusky gardens heedless of the floor keepers plight.

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Date: 8/20/2017 9:06:00 PM
Once when young and carefree I loved to dance. Especially with the pretty ladies.. Now pretty images of dancing beauties oft fill my dreams.. You describe olden times when life was far more mellow and dances far more formal.. Great poem my friend...
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/20/2017 9:16:00 PM
Thank you Robert.
Date: 8/20/2017 8:34:00 PM
Beautifully worded with total recall of my younger days on ballroom floors dancing then getting paid with a part time job to clean those floors. Great nostalgic poem, Patricia!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/20/2017 8:42:00 PM
Thank you Ralph or the comment and the memory.
Date: 8/20/2017 5:04:00 PM
Hi Patricia , wonderful write , Cinderella dance floor full of history and scares to show ::))))hugs
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/20/2017 5:23:00 PM
I thank you Niall. I have always dreamed of attending one of those Balls. In Vienna of course.
Date: 8/19/2017 11:54:00 PM
That is a beautiful poem Patricia. You write with so much imagery, it's incredible, I can see that poor floor keeper.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/20/2017 12:05:00 AM
Thank you Darren. I guess in those days, as today, each class (yes I believe it exists even today) had its own place and the worker was there to afford the wealthy ease and freedom. Yet, oh how wonderful to attend such a ball.

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