For Spring Is Here

Let me 'neath fleecy clouds be. For spring is here.
God's creation all for me. For spring is here.

So many glorious gardens to admire,
Clematis attracts a bee. For spring is here.

Aubrietia produced in profusion,
Scented Daphne in valley. For spring is here.

Up in the mountains, veiled with alpine flora,
Wild primrose and rosemary. For spring is here.

Orioles and robins lured by blush cherries,
Magnolias so airy. For spring is here.

But there on the calm wide seas, racing dinghies
Ketches, sloops sail to the quay. For spring is here.

Oh man, what's that I hear, someone is sneezing?
Hay fever? Or allergy? For spring is here.

11 syllables per line.

11 September 2020
Ghazal Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Silent One

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 8/30/2022 9:24:00 PM
Looking at your first post in poetry soup has been a delight ! I feel spring is here before me.
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Date: 8/9/2022 3:49:00 PM
Back with congratulations after such a long, long time. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 4/23/2022 1:16:00 AM
A visit to your first post, Victor, so glad i did, beautiful poetry.
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Date: 1/13/2022 12:04:00 AM
Clematis, Daphne, Rosemary ... Brides of Spring? Victor, I love this, your first, poem on PS. The twist at end, spring allergies, is brilliant. Shalom, shalom
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Date: 12/3/2020 1:27:00 PM
this is delightful. I had to scroll way down to find one I had not read or commented to . Also, a belated congrats.
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Date: 10/3/2020 5:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/1/2020 5:40:00 PM
It seems that Spring and Autumn have allergies associated with them. :) Rosemary is my favorite herb. You write so well, Victor. Peace, Angie
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Date: 9/27/2020 10:13:00 AM
Oh, what joy and beauty spills from your glorious pen, Victor. Your appreciation for Nature is palpable, as is your dismay over allergy season.. Exquisite in form and imagery, dear poet. Love the end twist! Warmest wishes always, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/20/2020 10:08:00 AM
Spring is such a wonderful time of year. It is Autumn here in Canada and though we miss the sweet smells of Spring Autumn has The riot of color that no other season has and the merry, busy days of harvest. Each season is so wonderful that I can never make up my mind which is my favorite. Great write here celebrating Spring. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/17/2020 3:07:00 AM
spring is here in the mind of poetic writing, in joyful heart of creative poetic expression... excellent poem penned... enjoyable ... MB of BD
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Date: 9/14/2020 10:12:00 AM
A creative, well crafted write as you always have written Victor, and all because Spring is here, for us too in Johannesburg. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/13/2020 6:15:00 PM
Lovely as always! I delight in the chosen flora and how they flow from the tongue. And I’m a sucker for the sea and its implements. Best wishes for contest!
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Date: 9/13/2020 3:29:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work for the Ghazal contest. They are not so easy to write but you have done a good job and it reads like a good contender. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 9/13/2020 3:14:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your ode to spring in Ghazal form, Victor. Nice to have you back, you were missed. Best wishes in the contest and hope all is well with you and yours ~ John
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Date: 9/12/2020 10:21:00 PM
what a joyful read from your golden pen, victor!...i await the next one...huggs
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Date: 9/12/2020 5:15:00 AM
Lovely to read you today sweet Victor! Enjoyed this, your surprise ending made me giggle ~xomo! <3
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Date: 9/11/2020 7:50:00 PM
Victor, welcome back. :) You have expressed this so beautifully- as Spring is a lovely season to embrace. You are right though, it is the season for sneezing. It is so good to read your poetry again. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 9/11/2020 6:36:00 PM
I love your last line, oh, dear, hay fever or allergies spring is so here... good luck in the contest my friend... I am glad your back.
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Date: 9/11/2020 1:01:00 PM
Your poem of blossoming springtime is a welcome reverie, Victor. I've missed reading these marvelous gems of yours. Best of wishes for the contest. :)
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Date: 9/11/2020 11:31:00 AM
A lovely description of spring, Victor. The "sneezing" is always the first sign of spring here. Nice to see you writing again. Best wishes in Silent One's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 9/11/2020 9:35:00 AM
Dear Victor how good it is to see your poetry again, welcome back my friend ~ PS has missed you... such joyful images of springtime you portray ~ always my favourite time of year; good luck with the contest. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 9/11/2020 7:21:00 AM
I'm so glad to see you back, Victor:) I have been constantly praying for you... A lovely ghazal is this one, I love spring and your description is simply mind-blowing:) welcome back:)
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Date: 9/11/2020 6:07:00 AM
Glad to see you again my friend--welcome! Truly a joyous tone to this happy poem. A sure winner, Victor.
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Date: 9/11/2020 5:21:00 AM
For Victor is here! With his so beautiful poetry.. with his amazing twists! So wonderful a Ghazal! You have been tremendously missed, Victor! Hope you are fine.. so much pleased to read your profound and unique poetry! and the best of luck in the contest! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Date: 9/11/2020 4:51:00 AM
All the colors and scents of spring, Wonderful write Victor, sorry you lost your poems
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