For Sometimes Love Is Not Enough

Hey sugar I’m defriending you
The time has come to say adeiu
A long time pal who undermines 
the plans I make to change my life.
Sweetly in my life each day 
your crystal heart has caused decay.

Lurking unexpectedly
Any chance to ambush me
You’re hidden there in every bite,
Satisfying, smug delight.
Which I regret everytime
I can’t stop, once I taste:
My heart beats
Eyes dilate
I’ve fallen for your sweetened charm.

But sometimes love is not enough 
Your honied calI I must rebuff.

Addicted! 
I try so hard to give you up

All my life you’ve been there
Pretend to give, but you don’t care
For the chaos left behind:
Rotten teeth and heart disease
Diabetes, swollen knees
Expanding waist, 
Bloated face
Your reputation in disgrace.

You have to go!
Your time is up!
A wholesome friend is what I want.
Take your saccharine caress elsewhere.

Now l stand my ground, I’m being tough
For sometimes love is not enough.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 9/17/2019 3:07:00 PM
Tricia congratulations on your win
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Date: 9/15/2019 12:19:00 AM
Back to say Congratulations and blessings
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Tricia Lucas-Clarke
Date: 9/15/2019 1:17:00 AM
Thanks Regina
Date: 9/14/2019 12:18:00 PM
Enjoyed your take on the contest, Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Tricia Lucas-Clarke
Date: 9/15/2019 1:17:00 AM
Thank you,. I'm pleased you enjoyed it.
Date: 9/12/2019 11:39:00 AM
Really well expressed thoughts and emotions. Nicely ended as well, those last two line were perfect
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Tricia Lucas-Clarke
Date: 9/12/2019 4:50:00 PM
Thanks Chris.I appreciate your comments . Kind regards Tricia
Date: 9/12/2019 8:42:00 AM
I love your poem... it is such an original. Your talents shines through your words. Blessings to you and best for the contest.
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Tricia Lucas-Clarke
Date: 9/12/2019 9:23:00 AM
Hi Regina, Thanks for taking the time to comment. I appreciate your kind words. It was fun to write. Kindest regards, Tricia
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