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For Savione

I knew you, not so long ago When just a little boy Always there for your baby sister Who followed you everywhere I felt then, you carried a burden To my regre I could not reach you At ten years old, I didn’t get you to "speak" it! I should have tried a little bit harder I will always remember you, Savione The warm smile you hid; you seldom showed Lived just behind those sad, brown eyes You had moved far away from Cali with Mom And your Dad, I’m sure you missed Whatever made you sad, I’d never know 'Cause soon, we also moved away We heard how you’d grown into this fine young man Still taking care of your sister; Still with those sad brown eyes So glad you made many friends along the way... Losing touch for those few years, haunts me I’ll never know why you took your life… Maybe I should have kept in touch with Mom Should have mentioned, how you looked so sad I’ll never know why you took your life…. At twenty three, what darkness took you to the edge? Was there no one to whom you could turn? Did I miss a chance to share the burden with you? So sad is the day you went away I’ll never know why you took your life…. ~*~ For Savione...sleep in peace, little one. +

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/4/2013 11:00:00 PM
Very sad poem, Annalise, my condolences for your friend, well said goodbye
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Date: 3/17/2013 10:25:00 AM
enjoying this moving tribute again, my friend x
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Date: 3/9/2013 5:21:00 AM
Excellent. Very moving poem. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 3/8/2013 9:16:00 AM
such a beautiful and touching write for Savione, my friend - maybe your sweet words will reach him x
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Date: 3/7/2013 3:55:00 PM
i can so relate to this Annalise, amazing poetry, yet so heartfelt...
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Date: 3/7/2013 10:49:00 AM
Suicide hurts all those that touched on the life of the one that choses to no longer live here on earth...You saw the sadness but so many live with a person that is depressed and never see that the person is depressed..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence is always uplifting..Sara
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Date: 3/7/2013 6:44:00 AM
"I’ll never know why you took your life…." You have saddened me deeply this grey morning my dear Annalise. So touching a write! Love, Jack
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Date: 3/6/2013 7:46:00 PM
Sad isn't it ?,when we miss an opportunity, especially if guilt hangs in the air. Unfortunately, for those determined, there is nothing we are able to do except, in some cases, add ( with our love and compassion ) a little more time to their journey on this plane . Bill .
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Date: 3/6/2013 6:56:00 PM
Always a pleasure reading your words Annalise, even through loss they share a vision of life. God Blessed your ability to have introduced me to Savione. Thanks or the share!
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Date: 3/6/2013 6:15:00 PM
Very touching poem Annalise. Blessings
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