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For Sake of Form What makes you think I want to see your very naked ass standing there displaying all, lacking any class? You ancients felt that bearing all to everyone was norm. There you are with less than you had on when you were born. I don’t know why someone thought a nudie was a beauty when only a little baby’s rump can be called a cutie. You say you are a model and this is a work of art but could the awful smell mean that you just passed a ______ Yes, this classic body part has another function, keeping us alive each day, when we get the unction. For sake of form let’s say the artist’s goal is paramount. Looking at your rear is dull. It’s what’s up front that counts. 10/8/17 Poems that paint a picture 4 Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 10/13/2017 10:41:00 PM
LOL - very funny in a very naughty way, Janis, (though I personally find the male body repulsive) - congratulations on your well-written win, my friend - nicely done! :-)
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Date: 10/13/2017 5:50:00 AM
Interesting take on the contest, I agree with you though.. However, a lot of painters painted nudity.. Well written Janis.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/8/2017 3:16:00 PM
L O L awesome angle (tee hee) on this contest! My best to you! :) xomo
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Date: 10/8/2017 1:48:00 PM
Wow! How awesome, clever, witty and excellently written your poem is Janis. Had me smiling all the way through, but your last two lines knocked me out :) I love it! Great take on the contest theme, good luck!
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