Constance La France Poet Verse

For Rent

 
The sign read
Apartment for rent
Within heritage building
I climbed steep steps to the third level
Big windows and hardwood floors
A nice cozy nest
To call home

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May 14, 2015

Poetry/Septet Verse/For Rent
Copyright Protected, ID 05-673-104-14
All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France


Written for the Standard contest, Give Me A Sign
sponsor, Nette Onclaud, Judged 2015

Third Place

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Kim Merryman June 7, 2015 at 6:42 PM Definitely a feel good write! Congrats on your win, Constance! Love, Kim

Skat A June 6, 2015 at 11:23 PM Broken, congratulations on your win. Goodnight **SKAT**

Eve Roper June 6, 2015 at 9:50 PM Congrats on your win :-) ?hugs eve

Judy Konos June 6, 2015 at 8:48 PM This could be the beginning of a movie that's how interesting it is......

John Lawless June 6, 2015 at 3:19 PM ...and to steal a quote from Dorothy.."there's no place like home". A beautifully soft and soothing poem.

Andrea Dietrich June 6, 2015 at 1:18 PM oh, I REALLY like this one, Constance. It appeals to my love of home. Congrats for your well deserved win.

Jan Allison June 6, 2015 at 10:16 AM My comment has disappeared broken wings! many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight June 6, 2015 at 9:49 AM Nice take on 'give me a sign' Broken! Congratulations on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra

Paul Callus June 6, 2015 at 9:36 AM Wow! I love this one Constance! I hope that sign got taken down! Congrats on a deserved win. // paul Constance La France June 7, 2015 at 10:54 AM It did ... love my old apartment with all its many flaws

Gitlan George May 15, 2015 at 4:52 PM very nice! heart for rent!...

Sara Kendrick May 15, 2015 at 2:53 PM That is a good sign..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara..Glad that you have a kitten to grow to love..It takes time to bond with a new pet..No two animals are alike..

Emile Pinet May 15, 2015 at 11:26 AM You describe your experience perfectly and it takes shape in my mind’s eye. Emile.

Sneha Rv May 15, 2015 at 7:11 AM This is lovely!! All the best in the contest!! :D :D

Afolabi Muideen May 15, 2015 at 1:43 AM Excellent work..........good luck in the contest.

Nandita Das May 14, 2015 at 10:24 PM Love the big windows which lets you glimpse the outside world from within. Can feel the warmth of "home". A good story behind the sign. Excellent. 7

David Meade May 14, 2015 at 9:41 PM I love these types of old buildings -- you can almost feel the history and stories they hold . . . truly a good sign. Best of luck. 7