For One Pass of Your Lips - a Re-Write

you’d whisper into my ear
but it was my heart 
absorbed your words
when you loved me 

way back than

you wrote your words and they made me cry
you wrote those words and you know i died 

when you did your round about
when you turned on the heat
turned over every single leaf
left me out alone 
in the dead of spring
or 
was it winter, 
it must of been
'cause i thought I’d freeze

thinking back 
you never shied away
you’d whip back your thick black mane 
(shined like the sun hid there at nights)
exposed your china white skin
 never said hush always ready to play

still remember your dice
the ones in gold 
with embedded gems in blue

you loved to roll them
the snake eyes bit
i'd swallow the poison like lemonade

handcuffed and whipped
your ceramic nails 
tearing into my back

wore my white shirt
'till someone screamed
from behind it was blood red
i dripped on the floor like a lit candle

melted 

you clicked your ruby heels
and you were gone

climbed the ladder
briefcase 
Armani suit
never shed a tear 

i would yell like a cowboy
riding a bucking bronco
not once did i ever fall 

again


but i knew who i was
make no mistake 
every rodeo has its clown
and I spoke fluent bull

the only knifes i carried 
were still in my back
i lived with the pain

when i saw you yesterday
i held my breath for longer than i ever had
i thought the room would flip like a double sided coin

we spoke

i saw it in yours eyes

regret

you’d heard of my success
how fine i looked in my silk woven garb

you said
drinks

but i looked at my watch
and i think your teeth fell out
when i walked away

i could hear your tears

you threw it all away
when you decided 
to look the other way
it broke me inside
i'd never be the same

i never turned to look 
yesterday

the message i sent was clear
we’d never be we again

how did i feel
me

me 
i'd give my right arm
for one pass of your breath 
against my lips

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 8/21/2021 11:44:00 AM
Another stellar write, Maurice. The sense of overwhelming loss stretches outward from each crisp, poignant line. Congratulations! Best wishes, Brian
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Date: 1/1/2019 10:56:00 AM
My good friend...this poetry has struck a deep chord inside of me...it is, and I struggle to articulate my thoughts - truly beautiful!! No one does this sort of poetic writing any better! May your God bless you and keep you safe always. Your friend. :) john P.s Have a wonderful and rewarding "Happy New Year", Armand!
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Date: 10/24/2018 2:08:00 PM
Sad, loving, painful, intense, it's got everything; a wonderfully penned piece of poetry; love the line: "but i knew who i was make no mistake every rodeo has its clown and I spoke fluent bull"
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Date: 10/17/2018 10:42:00 AM
This drew me in with each new line. Nice write.
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Date: 10/16/2018 11:10:00 PM
beautiful loving poem /// penned nicely
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