Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Poet Free verse

For Now

In a melancholic haze
slow moving
breath is laboured
through this time
heavy days
that are numbered
till by this thick air between us
I am unencumbered
till I can love you
my passion
present you my zenith
before you I will bloom
with the power of Venus

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Tom Rutherford October 23, 2017 at 6:18 PM Wonderfully written Maureen, I can feel the tension, the longing, the passion. Nicely done! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 23, 2017 at 8:55 PM Thank you Tom :) xomo!

Winged Warrior October 22, 2017 at 10:06 AM Well penned my lady friend...for now lol...god bless...^WW^ Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 22, 2017 at 10:48 PM Lol! ;p Thankya xomo!

Chuck Melugin October 22, 2017 at 8:21 AM And bloom you did! I am in awe of your "Moment" My best to you, chuck Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 22, 2017 at 8:29 AM Thank you so much Chuck, a lovely day to you! xomo :)

Mike Hauser October 21, 2017 at 8:07 AM Beautiful! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 21, 2017 at 8:38 AM Thank you Mike :) xomo!

Demetrios Trifiatis October 21, 2017 at 7:55 AM Venus emerges from the sea of beauty when the worthy one appears! Excellent writing my friend, Maureen! I am certain he will appreciate what he would see! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 21, 2017 at 8:38 AM Thank you so much Demetrios, bless! xomo <3

Russell Sivey October 21, 2017 at 7:09 AM This is an exciting write, full of the zenith of words and love! Passion carries this poem through the haze and will someday reach its destination! What a beautifully written piece, Great Work!! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 21, 2017 at 7:41 AM Destination passion rabbit hole, only the poetry survived :) Thank you so much Russell, a wonderful day to you! xomo

James Swartz October 20, 2017 at 11:04 PM This is a wonderful piece Maureen. The wants of the heart play tricks on the mind. Or is it the other way around? Maybe one day someone will have an answer I can believe. For now I'm satisfied reading your words. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 21, 2017 at 6:51 AM Oh the tricks, so well stated James; this s an older poem and so much of the emotional chaos of that time can be summed up in your question. Theses words what I've got to show for it. :) Thank you James, I really appreciate your words xomo!

Andrea Dietrich October 20, 2017 at 7:23 PM How lovely this is, Maureen! Love the ending!! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 21, 2017 at 6:53 AM Thank you Andrea :) bless! xomo

Mike Gentile October 20, 2017 at 3:42 PM Beautiful, Maureen and I'm sure the wait will be worth it when reunited! xxoo Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 20, 2017 at 5:01 PM Well wasn't in the end lol :) an older pen, still love the poem though ;p Thank you Mike, muchos hugs

Arthur Vaso October 20, 2017 at 2:15 PM For now this is a beautiful poem, well forever it is! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 20, 2017 at 4:57 PM Thank you Arthur :) xomo!

Silent One October 20, 2017 at 1:54 PM I hope you can love him again and overcome your melancholic mood... Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 20, 2017 at 4:56 PM Oh I did :) on alder poem I must confess xo thank you so <3