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For Nikko: Remember Me - Tails

TAILS Under new moon, Empowered fox Devoured cow, Wondered how, Chewed hen, Booed men, Jumped on box, Under new moon: Werefox. *thanks to Sara K for her help

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Kash Poet

Date: 2/1/2012 3:18:00 AM

Congrats jack on your win.Enjoyed the read.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/31/2012 11:41:00 PM

I had a lot of fun reading this and I thought it was cute how you used "werefox" because "werewolf" won't be allowed! Very fun read for me, Jack :) Super congrats on your win!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/31/2012 1:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your super win today in "Nikko's" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/31/2012 11:02:00 AM

Good one, Congratulations, this is fun as well x

Kash Poet

Date: 1/22/2012 7:48:00 AM

Very good poem on the contest theme Jack.Enjoyed the read.Best wishes.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2012 10:09:00 PM

that last word Werefox was an awesome little turn!! It made the whole poem come together! Hey, thanks for the four comments today. LUv, Andrea

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/16/2012 11:14:00 PM

Great poem for Nikko's contest. Another one for competition, and a good one.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/16/2012 2:42:00 PM

Got a chuckle, Jack..Enjoyed..You went in a told different direction with it..Like the last line so totally you..Thanks for the kind reviews..Have great eve..Sara