For My Eyes Only

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7/24/2024 for A funny Summer Limerick Poetry Contest sponsored by Tania Kitchen

In summer, I drag old bones to the beach. High surf and bikini clad women teach that, shining in the sun, there are some kinds of fun that are for me, not my eyes, out of reach.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2024 1:57:00 PM

Very good one. Big congrats

David Crandall
Date: 8/19/2024 6:46:00 PM

Thanks Andrea!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/18/2024 9:50:00 AM

David, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun limerick.

David Crandall
Date: 8/18/2024 10:16:00 AM

Thanks Tania, I always have fun doing limericks!

Karen Jones

Date: 7/25/2024 1:43:00 PM

Hmmm is this about eye candy? lol good one

David Crandall
Date: 7/25/2024 2:31:00 PM

Yep, that eye candy...and also, missing youth, and its pleasures, including body surfing in waves, football on the beach, etc. etc. etc. lol today, I can only look :-)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 7/24/2024 8:50:00 PM

This is an interesting poem. Enjoy the beach.

David Crandall
Date: 7/24/2024 10:15:00 PM

Thanks Hilda. Luckily, I'm only 3 miles from the beach.