For My Dearest Beloved

As I watch your eyes glowing by candlelight; My quivered hands labor to arrange my thoughts In the near call of evening’s final anthem-- How this soul dares for one precious moment Which needs to hold you in my ocean of silence, And perhaps , when I enter into a flight at rest Today’s rain would cleanse away all my offenses, Allowing us to drink life’s sweet ambrosia… Like the first coo of our newborn, ordeals turning Into headways, soft dances after a foolish rift; That my heart rejoices-- for you are the only anchor Grounding me from dark waters, propped by An Indulgence of love when lost dreams find Me captive— your gentle strength abides, unflagging, Then to be life’s calming tide whistling on our trails I shall yearn for your caress, your nectar of wine— Until rainfall ceases, my fragrance of endless ardor Will linger upon pillows of a co-owned bed… Quietly, Look upon moonbeam’s eyes… Darling, I am there. Silent One's Last Letter To My Beloved 12/26/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/16/2018 3:28:00 PM
A lovely poem, Nette. Love your phrasing, particularly line 3, "In the near call of evening’s final anthem". // Barry
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Date: 12/16/2018 2:31:00 PM
Back with congrats nette, on your well deserved first place in the contest.
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Date: 12/16/2018 1:50:00 PM
This was captivating, love the lines 'soft dances after a foolish rift', congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/16/2018 11:50:00 AM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest .... beautiful written, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/16/2018 11:27:00 AM
Congratulations for your great win Nette :)
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Date: 12/16/2018 11:09:00 AM
A beautiful poem with so many poetic lines.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 12/16/2018 9:31:00 AM
comforting to know that someone will be there. a vow dancing to an endless song...real love!
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Date: 12/16/2018 1:00:00 AM
ah how I wish I had someone who thought as you, lovely poem!
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Date: 12/15/2018 7:29:00 PM
Love filled verses in precious words...excellent flow.. .enjoyed reading your poem, nette. Best for a win at the TOP.
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Date: 12/15/2018 6:45:00 PM
Beautiful sentiments in this letter, nette. Well done as usual - Bob
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Date: 12/15/2018 6:27:00 PM
So smoothly written. Beautiful and comforting. Well done Nette :)
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