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For the the 'Couplet Contest ' Poetry Contest of Karen Jones

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For Love of Iowa

Snow, snow, drifting down on little towns and farms,
Snow, snow glistens on the oaks’ and maples’ arms.

River, river from the north, with thaw of ice it flows,
Mighty Mississippi, past my little hometown goes.

Blooms, blooms, pretty blooms, and lilacs scent the air.
Blooms, blooms paint the land beneath a rainbow fair.

Hills, hills, soft and rolling, low and grassy mounds,
Hills, hills, some are ancient natives’ burial grounds.

Stars, stars, flitting stars that wink in twilight skies,
Stars, stars, tiny stars are summer’s fireflies!

Corn, corn, fields of corn, so wide and green and high.
Corn, corn, stalks of corn keep reaching to the sky.

Leaves, leaves dance on streets while children walk to school,
Leaves that tango, red and gold, as days and nights grow cool.

Home, home, harvest home, where crops are gathered in,
Home sweet home, as I recall, is hearth of kith and kin.
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Hind Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 3:02 PM
Enjoyed your nostalgia... <3
Andresen Avatar
December 11, 2024 at 4:50 AM
- A creative way to describe it... lovely poem, Andrea :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
Jones Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 12:32 PM
Andrea this was charming and a relaxing read! I love the imagery and the flow as it was like a fresh breeze blowing. I imagine it to be very beautiful as you describe! Thanks for entering my contest! Congrats on your placement!
Dietrich Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 5:55 PM
Thanks so much, Karen
George Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 12:03 AM
Lovely poem of a beautiful stretch of land where mountains tower high and rivers flow in winding course, where flowers bloom and fields of corn stretch wide. Beautiful poem bringing nostalgic memories.
Bayles Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 7:57 PM
Beautiful, Andrea. I love the rhythm and rhyme, and the playfulness of the poem.
Wolf Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 8:08 PM
Love the effect you've achieved with your innovation, Andrea! Excelsior, Gershon
Narain Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 10:29 AM
Nice poem in new style.
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 3:48 PM
thanks, It just came to me to do that style.
Buhagiar Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 9:26 AM
Loved the repetitions in your poem. Makes it interesting. Pity I never travelled such long distances.
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 3:48 PM
Yes, it's unfortunate. I am so lucky I got to see parts of Europe and even Israel when I did Semester Abroad in Madrid.
Magdalinos Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 3:08 AM
A lovely poem ,Andrea. God bless you.
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 3:48 PM
thanks, Mulu
Sangster - K Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 7:02 PM
A delightful read for me this evening. Your poem paints beautiful picture :-) Hugs~Anne xox
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 3:49 PM
thanks, I loved living in Iowa. rarely get to see it any more.
Read Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 10:25 AM
Iowa sounds like a beautiful place, good luck in the contest Andrea. xx
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 3:49 PM
No mountains like here in Utah, but I sure do miss the fireflies.
DiMino Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 8:26 AM
Ah! Precious. Very imaginative and original. Love it! Write, write, whether day or night -- it is an artist's heart in tune, and his soul in, joyful, creative flight.
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 3:49 PM
thanks so much.
Allison Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 7:31 AM
it sounds so beautiful Andrea. I would love to visit the USA again one day!:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 3:49 PM
wish you could visit
Buehler Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 11:10 PM
I enjoyed your beautiful tribute, Andrea. I love the imagery and the rhyming. Blessings. :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 3:50 PM
thanks, Dear
Tor Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 5:12 PM
A lovely state to grow up in Andrea. New York should take notes lol...
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 3:50 PM
Parts of New York are very lovely though, right?
Rolland Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 1:52 PM
great tribute to Iowa, only know the name, this is really nice and melodious poem, enjoyed
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 3:51 PM
thanks. Iowa is often confused with Idaho, known for potatoes. Iowa is known for corn and is similar in looks to Ohio, which it also gets confused with. Ohio is a few states closer to the east.
Cunningham Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 1:47 PM
Sounds like a a beautiful state Andrea, you've written a fine tribute.. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 3:51 PM
thanks, Tom
Empress Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 1:21 PM
Wow this is so melodious! Its like i heard a melody while reading this, and in my mind i was singing these lines! Good one so picturesque also! And creative wordplay! pleasure reading! best wishes always
Dietrich Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 1:23 PM
Thanks, Inky!!
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