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For the the 'Couplet Contest ' Poetry Contest of Karen Jones

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Snow, snow, drifting down on little towns and farms, Snow, snow glistens on the oaks’ and maples’ arms. River, river from the north, with thaw of ice it flows, Mighty Mississippi, past my little hometown goes. Blooms, blooms, pretty blooms, and lilacs scent the air. Blooms, blooms paint the land beneath a rainbow fair. Hills, hills, soft and rolling, low and grassy mounds, Hills, hills, some are ancient natives’ burial grounds. Stars, stars, flitting stars that wink in twilight skies, Stars, stars, tiny stars are summer’s fireflies! Corn, corn, fields of corn, so wide and green and high. Corn, corn, stalks of corn keep reaching to the sky. Leaves, leaves dance on streets while children walk to school, Leaves that tango, red and gold, as days and nights grow cool. Home, home, harvest home, where crops are gathered in, Home sweet home, as I recall, is hearth of kith and kin.

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Date: 12/14/2024 3:02:00 PM
Enjoyed your nostalgia... <3
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Date: 12/11/2024 4:50:00 AM
- A creative way to describe it... lovely poem, Andrea :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 12/10/2024 12:32:00 PM
Andrea this was charming and a relaxing read! I love the imagery and the flow as it was like a fresh breeze blowing. I imagine it to be very beautiful as you describe! Thanks for entering my contest! Congrats on your placement!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/10/2024 5:55:00 PM
Thanks so much, Karen
Date: 12/10/2024 12:03:00 AM
Lovely poem of a beautiful stretch of land where mountains tower high and rivers flow in winding course, where flowers bloom and fields of corn stretch wide. Beautiful poem bringing nostalgic memories.
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Date: 12/8/2024 7:57:00 PM
Beautiful, Andrea. I love the rhythm and rhyme, and the playfulness of the poem.
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Date: 12/7/2024 8:08:00 PM
Love the effect you've achieved with your innovation, Andrea! Excelsior, Gershon
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Date: 12/7/2024 10:29:00 AM
Nice poem in new style.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/7/2024 3:48:00 PM
thanks, It just came to me to do that style.
Date: 12/7/2024 9:26:00 AM
Loved the repetitions in your poem. Makes it interesting. Pity I never travelled such long distances.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/7/2024 3:48:00 PM
Yes, it's unfortunate. I am so lucky I got to see parts of Europe and even Israel when I did Semester Abroad in Madrid.
Date: 12/7/2024 3:08:00 AM
A lovely poem ,Andrea. God bless you.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/7/2024 3:48:00 PM
thanks, Mulu
Date: 12/6/2024 7:02:00 PM
A delightful read for me this evening. Your poem paints beautiful picture :-) Hugs~Anne xox
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/7/2024 3:49:00 PM
thanks, I loved living in Iowa. rarely get to see it any more.
Date: 12/6/2024 10:25:00 AM
Iowa sounds like a beautiful place, good luck in the contest Andrea. xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/7/2024 3:49:00 PM
No mountains like here in Utah, but I sure do miss the fireflies.
Date: 12/6/2024 8:26:00 AM
Ah! Precious. Very imaginative and original. Love it! Write, write, whether day or night -- it is an artist's heart in tune, and his soul in, joyful, creative flight.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/7/2024 3:49:00 PM
thanks so much.
Date: 12/6/2024 7:31:00 AM
it sounds so beautiful Andrea. I would love to visit the USA again one day!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/7/2024 3:49:00 PM
wish you could visit
Date: 12/5/2024 11:10:00 PM
I enjoyed your beautiful tribute, Andrea. I love the imagery and the rhyming. Blessings. :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/7/2024 3:50:00 PM
thanks, Dear
Date: 12/5/2024 5:12:00 PM
A lovely state to grow up in Andrea. New York should take notes lol...
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/7/2024 3:50:00 PM
Parts of New York are very lovely though, right?
Date: 12/5/2024 1:52:00 PM
great tribute to Iowa, only know the name, this is really nice and melodious poem, enjoyed
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/7/2024 3:51:00 PM
thanks. Iowa is often confused with Idaho, known for potatoes. Iowa is known for corn and is similar in looks to Ohio, which it also gets confused with. Ohio is a few states closer to the east.
Date: 12/5/2024 1:47:00 PM
Sounds like a a beautiful state Andrea, you've written a fine tribute.. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/7/2024 3:51:00 PM
thanks, Tom
Date: 12/5/2024 1:21:00 PM
Wow this is so melodious! Its like i heard a melody while reading this, and in my mind i was singing these lines! Good one so picturesque also! And creative wordplay! pleasure reading! best wishes always
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/5/2024 1:23:00 PM
Thanks, Inky!!

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