For How Long

For how long must the world sufferer fallacious arguments,
that war wins the right to rule, scarlet, the stains of blood,
as leaders eviscerate their people, internal organs strew escarpments,
curious vultures bide their time, waiting till the dying die,
to bewilder, plunge innocents into the trenches of war, tantalize
with fallacious promises of wealth and good health, do leaders, they
create a vortex, a black hole scenario, where all human life meets death,
inadvertently, not knowing there will be a winner, Mother Nature,
a new chance for wildlife, the survival of the fittest, to which they all relate,
let peace be the way, reach out to all life, let peace rule with good will I pray!

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06/13/2018

Eight word challenge - 7 Poetry Contest - Sponsored by John Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Haight Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 1:54 PM
Such a great poem, Mick. Congrats on your nice placement in the contest! Sandra
Waters Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 1:49 AM
good theme = congratz
Talbot Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 2:02 AM
Many thanks, Virginia, Mick
Gentry Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 8:24 AM
Congratulations on your win with this creative write using the 8 words. Well done!
Talbot Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 2:01 AM
Many thanks Susan, Mick
Hamilton Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 6:54 PM
Hi Mick great write, I know eviscerate ...ew, but it gets the muses going. Look at these marvelous poems, your was great, so well written, congrats!
Talbot Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 2:45 AM
Many thanks, John, appreciated, Mick
Rodrigues Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 7:47 AM
You did well for this contest! Your imagery and emotions apt! ...fallacious arguments, strew escarpments
Talbot Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 10:01 AM
Thanks Kim, eviscerate, such a horrible word! Mick
Roper Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 9:12 PM
Mick, great verse for the challenge,,,, good luck in the contest.. Hugs eve
Roper Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 10:16 PM
"disembowel "yes that is a terrible word... but if you think about it cult leaders kind of do that with their followers .. by living their brains empty or brain washed so it leaves only his hypnotic teaching
Talbot Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 12:53 AM
Thanks Eve, I'm still wondering where eviscerate came from; I've done a bit in my time, (Chickens, and various sorts of game, just in case you were wondering LOL). hugs Mick
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