For Haiti (Beatlemania)

For John Heck's Beatlemania competition.  To the tune of "For No One" from the Revolver 
album.

The day fades, the earth shakes
The Haitians find their homes no longer stand as families fear their future

They struggle through rubble
To find survivors, loved ones who've succumbed quietly to nature's violence

And in their eyes we see despair
No spark of hope behind the tears shed for victims
So many lives lost in tremors

They want help, they need ours
And so we dig through empty pockets struggling to find scant resources

And in our eyes they see empathy
In tears we promise to do what little we can offer 
To ease a pain that knows no end

We stay home, we watch them
The TV shows such agony that all are moved to send their prayers and sympathy

A day breaks, our hearts ache
Such turmoil spills upon the screen and we reach out to help our Haitian brothers

And in God's eyes they are children
As are we all now joined in hearts and in sadness
Rebuild this nation with His help
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Freeman Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 9:50 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your third place win, Well deserved , an awesome poem. Sincere, Agape, Moses
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 9:37 AM
Congratulations Carolyn, You did it well, again! Your BEATLEMANIA SING-ALONG poem is the 3rd place winners in the contest Sponsored by: John Heck! I can hear the tune playing. (I thought I had commented on this before...(?) Anyway, did at great job with the song and with your compassion for Hatti! SMILES…Dane Ann
Muzzey Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 8:31 AM
Congratulations on your third place win, well deserved, wonderful theme. Caryl
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 4:01 AM
Carolyn, Your poem contains all the warm compassion that most of us feel and is written beautifully. I can easily see why it was a winner. My daughter is an army nurse and she wanted to go help, but was not able to. Blessings, Connie
Shango Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 9:01 AM
To ease the pain that knows no end ... is a powerful truism. It seems applicable to all our mortal life ... and through it we are linked by a common humanity to the Haitian suffering. Good write and all the best.
Brown Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 11:17 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest Carolyn. Your heart is beautiful my friend. Love, Carol
Kelly Avatar
February 7, 2010 at 11:35 AM
Well writen , Caroline and well done on your deserved success ....
Crisci Avatar
February 7, 2010 at 8:21 AM
Corolyn, congratulations on your third win in John Heck's contest Beatlemania. Your lyric fits the melody perfectly! Your generosity and sympathy for this misfortunate nation are well expressed. I wish you continued success and may you have many more! Love and hugs, Andrew.
Strand Avatar
February 7, 2010 at 12:58 AM
Congrats on your success Carolyn (am designing a hand made card,thanks for your idea re my posting.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments and Kind words.
Delacroix Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 8:14 PM
Congrats on your win Carolyn! Well deserved! Best wishes. Love and Blessings, Caroline.
Foster Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 4:54 PM
Nice one Carolyn, lots of strong feelings. congratulations......Margaret
Dietrich Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 3:32 PM
Way to go, CArolyn! congratulations!
Richards Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 1:00 PM
Such a meaningful, and caring twist to the contest, Carolyn. We need many many reminders of the struggles ahead for the Haitians....the more we write in their behalf, the more help we might stir in people's hearts everywhere. Congratulations on the win in the contest! ~ love, Carrie
Sweetheart Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 12:47 PM
Congrats Carolyn on your third place win in the Beatlemania Contest.. kudos to u for a wonderful write and a fantastic win.. luv.. your friend.. Linda-Marie..
La France Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 10:46 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest with this wonderful song.....
Bolton Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 5:32 PM
I Know the song and an excellent write to it. Good job and good luck
Nunn Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 4:01 PM
A very good poem of such a sad subject,,great write....thanks on Not In The Math..LOL, I had to laugh on the "raging hormones"...Thank God for old age..those things get a feller to where he cannot think,,,Thanks Danny
Johnson Avatar
January 26, 2010 at 10:22 PM
Great subject. I don't know the Beatle song but I am sure you do, so good luck. Thank you for your comments on my haiku
Loving Iii Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 3:30 PM
such an out pouring for a people on the same side of the earth we live on just a few miles away. so close to us and we finally call them our brothers. a good thing. john
Knop Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 2:47 AM
Very expressive, Carolyn! The pictures on TV are sad and it is a good feeling that the people of Haiti receive help from so many. The saddest are the children who lost their families. To answer Frank's P.S.: Many problems in Africa lead back to the times of colonialism when countries and people were torn apart. It is a shame that slavery there still exists in our times....Love, Gert
Esquire Avatar
January 24, 2010 at 6:22 PM
Dear Carolyn, A Beautiful message written to a great Beatle Song YOUR Laureate status grows in my eyes Good Luck in the Contest ALWAYS YOURS...HG
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
January 21, 2010 at 5:07 PM
We have a chance to show we are not the greed and power hungry nation that others portray us as and a chance to help our fellow human beings. While the liberals are removing the most powerful tool we have, prayer. Vince
K. Avatar
January 21, 2010 at 3:48 AM
I'm not familiar with the song, Carolyn but your words really moved me--I couldn't help but feel the compassion in your poem and hopefully we all can do our own little share, as you said--everyone contributing even a little bit would amount to something huge--God bless you for this inspiring tribute...
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 1:37 PM
I think you did a great job here, Carolyn. I only wish I could remember that particular Beatle song to try the tune with your lyrics. I hope you can see the Lovely bones movie.Finally I am GOING back home for late lunch! LUv,andrea
Thekidster Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 12:18 PM
A very sad write set to a popular tune. I hope the haitian catastrophe is behind us soon. Yet another great write of yours Carolyn. Best Wishes Always, Bill
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