For Father's Month

September, and the rains begin
           Ripe drops of memory on the tongue
             September, and the robins spin
           Fresh songs sweet as hibiscus lung

              I am in your birth month, father
           Day covering me with your form, fife
              Me to dance your fiddle of life
            This month, wind tailored, clothed
              With days that you wore before
                      The abyss of eons
                 Spangled stars that gave dust
                       To the flesh of earth
            Here's our making and our daying place
                 This month garments memory
              Like your ties around a child's neck
                         And I, led gracefully
            Into the blue church's chamber, defaced
        Now by childhood recollection of transgressions
          Those whose jealousy of you made them sin
                   And stumbled in my eyes
        Where love etched your face on unstained glass
                  Those sweet light flooded panes
                    September brims me with light
                         But the sun fades fast
            I am glad its too early for leaves to fall
                    The sunset still its glory cast
           I play in the shadow of your love, singing
                          To the silent wall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/16/2010 7:49:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery created here,David. this is MY birth month too, so I love seeing a good September poem. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/16/2010 4:02:00 PM
a nice tribute and a roll play for any father even if it's about time, enjoyed your write today...P.D.
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Date: 9/16/2010 2:04:00 PM
David, my father was born Sept. 21 and to me, he was the greatest man I ever knew. I can really feel your love for your father in this beautiful poem. And although my Dad passed away last year, there are times when I still feel I am playing "in the shadow" of his love, too. Love, Carolyn
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