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For Days Unending and Hours Slow

for days unending and hours slow Where we stand, these distant shores beneath a moonlit canopy, stardust shimmers gather on hibiscus tides whispering hello as long walks take soft turns leaving destined footprints on my mind, wandering lost in coastal desires… I think of you, toes in the sand, feeling the waves caressing this island dream, this wish for days unending and hours slow while lips ignite passions reflecting on faraway horizons, tempting fingers, exploring nature’s endless bounties, bronze skin sensuality… Enchanted by a smile, a voice a touch, softly lingering like the silent surf, quietly beckoning in amorous patterns as we lie on cool shores, drenched in an evening made for only two, writing love poetry on a beach we now call our own… Good night Soupers

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Date: 2/9/2017 3:49:00 AM
This is more like you, Chris:) beautiful:) have a good night:)
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Date: 2/8/2017 7:14:00 PM
Beautiful and quite masterful, Sir. Adding this to my favorites. Great poem. Thank you for sharing -- Wesley C.
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Date: 2/8/2017 9:24:00 AM
Wow, this is one hot, sizzling poem, Chris. The fact that it takes place around water is adds such a cool dynamic to this dreamy island love poem. A marvelous treat for the senses. Love and more love to you and yours.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/8/2017 9:58:00 AM
Thanks so very much Freddie, I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 2/8/2017 7:59:00 AM
Hi Chris, What a great way to say good night. I found the write to be so romantic and passionate. I love just love the beach! :-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 2/8/2017 9:58:00 AM
Thank you so much my sweet friend for your always kind words to me.
Date: 2/8/2017 6:56:00 AM
We were at the beach tonight, and now you make me feel that I missed the point. Although we got caught by a fast ticking clock :( Beautiful poem.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/8/2017 9:57:00 AM
Don't you just hate those clocks? :) Thank so very much Scott
Date: 2/8/2017 4:30:00 AM
This is beautiful poetry Chris! I devoured it and then read it again and again! Truly lovely!
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Chris Green
Date: 2/8/2017 9:57:00 AM
Thank you so very much Sheila, I am thrilled you liked this one so much.
Date: 2/7/2017 10:56:00 PM
Good night, Chris. Loved the poem my friend, Very tender:)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/8/2017 9:56:00 AM
Thanks a bunch Daniel, glad you liked it.
Date: 2/7/2017 9:59:00 PM
Really lovely, Chris! Takes me away! Sleep well mate!
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Chris Green
Date: 2/8/2017 9:55:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 2/7/2017 9:31:00 PM
There are quiet beaches here, no one knows about, where two can find bliss on a bed of white sand with the music of the waves singing...I love your romantic poem Chris! It makes me realize how lucky I am to be living on my island. ; ) 7
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Chris Green
Date: 2/8/2017 9:55:00 AM
Thank you Connie, you are lucky my friend, enjoy your place in the sun.
Date: 2/7/2017 8:46:00 PM
'I think of you toes in the sand,feeling the waves caressing this island dream'-'a touch softly lingering like the silent surf'-Sigh...My favourite poem of all your favourite poems so far...I am so in love with this beauty.-Goodnight...A fave.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/8/2017 9:54:00 AM
Thank you so very much Charmaine, you comments are always so encouraging and uplifting to me. I am happy you liked this one.

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