For Dale - My Hero

My mother’s second marriage and a godsend!
For one became my mom’s devoted son.
Sharp, exuberant, red-haired and fun,
to everyone he met, a truer friend
there could not be than him, who would defend
righteousness and with steadfastness won
success! In life, he would not be undone
until he met, with Fate, an early end.

His life snuffed out, his family - aghast -
It finished fast - no time to blink; inhale!
He passed beyond the veil with wisdom vast
(what treasure you amassed, beloved Dale).
Though in my dreams, with us here, he is cast,
I know he now serves God where angels dwell.


For PD's Contest: Best Dedication Poem
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Watt Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 5:43 PM
From the facebook post I just read, it looks like birthday (for Dale) and anniversary (for you and Joe) messages were in order. As Maxwell Smart used to say, "Missed it by THAT much". You and my sister Susie were married within 2 months of each other (June for her). Congrats, my friend!
Watt Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 1:09 AM
This Italian sonnet always brings a lump to my throat and a smile to my heart. I have known this as "Dreaming Dale" from Friendship Garden. I know if he were alive he would be so supportive of your poetry talents. The way you write of him is so abundant in affection and admiration. If people in heaven can see people on earth I know he smiles upon the wonderful woman you are. And you will smile back when you meet him there. An amazing tribute to your step-brother Dale.
Minardi Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 8:00 AM
I believe Dale will read this poem with smile up there, in heaven. This is a great dedication.
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July 14, 2011 at 9:38 PM
Andrea, , Congratulations! Thank you for entering your poem in my contest and also supporting my contest. have yourself a great and wonderful night. ,..p.d.
Beadnall Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 7:27 AM
LOVELY. Tribute and many congrats on your winning best dedication poem,Andrea.
Taylor Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 11:16 AM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. Excellent piece. luv Ralph
Brown Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 10:32 AM
Congratulations Andrea for your win in the contest "best dedication poem" sponsored by P.D. Love, Carol
Susan Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 10:08 AM
a lovely tribute Andrea. congratulations on your win!
K. Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 10:00 AM
This is really a touching tribute for your beloved brother, Andrea-- I can just imagine how painful this was for you, he sure seemed like such a wonderful guy-- congrats on your win sweetie- hugs to you!
Warden Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 9:55 AM
Congratulations on your 2nd place win sponsored by P.D.,,great Dedication. dale is my middle name..So this is special to me.
Long Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 9:13 AM
congrats on your win cory
Johnson Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 8:11 AM
Oh he sounds so much like my beautiful red haired son who passed far too early. Congratulatiolns on your win Andrea. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 8:03 AM
Congrats Andrea on a super second place win with this lovely tribute poem so stirring and touching in content my friend.. a loving legacy u penned ..luv..
La France Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 7:39 AM
Full of love and emotions, Andrea, and congratulations on your win in PD's contest~~
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July 13, 2011 at 4:29 AM
Congrats Andrea on this lovely piece of poetry and tribute....love Michael
Mehta Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 3:57 AM
My congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Andrea
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July 13, 2011 at 3:17 AM
congrats on your big win in the contest andrea, this is a really touching and heartfelt tribute to a special person within your family...
Foster Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 1:55 PM
I am truly sorry for your loss. This is a beautifully penned tribute to the life of your Brother/ Hero Dale. I thank you for sharing such a heartfelt sonnet. May God's Love grant you peace. ~ Always, Adell
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January 5, 2011 at 2:27 PM
wow, im sorry to hear that loss. very nicely written, good imagery, thanks again nick
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January 5, 2011 at 12:43 PM
Beautifully written Andrea, a true tribute to a loved one. Thank you for your comment on my "Endings". I will indeed do a bit more than post poems on PS. I am going to educate myself on the different forms, and wow, there are so many. Take care
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January 5, 2011 at 11:58 AM
I'm sorry you had to lose such a great person who obviously added much happiness to your life. Good luck in the hero contest with your moving entry, Andrea. Best wishes for 2011, Carolyn
Jordan Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 11:19 AM
Andrea - what a heartfelt and beautiful tribute - I loved this poem - mj
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January 5, 2011 at 10:29 AM
This is a nice tribute to Dale and sounds like he was a wonderful person. The ghost ship was made up and is purely fictional. Thanks for reading it. Good news I had White Dust published in our seniors magazine this month. I am in 7th heaven. love Phyl
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January 5, 2011 at 10:22 AM
Andrea, I am sorry for your loss, but this is a beautiful tribute..Your wording is full of passion As Always, Shar
Austin Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 10:14 AM
You be de one with your sonnets. Dale must have been one-helluva-guy. There are a few who come along in life that are unforgettable. When you think of near-perfect, some unforgettable always comes to mind. Love, Dave
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