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''For Colored Girls Waiting To Exhale''

You descended on me from the stars above appearing out of visions overwhelming my still soul with your self as door by door opened on life’s passions to show me all the pleasures long been missed and for a second, I began to exhale then caught my breath daring to let go completely. The touch of your body overwhelmed my virgin predicament as years began to become one night and I exploded into paradise with innocence. Exhalation was inevitable. 6/22/18 Title from For Colored Girls Who Have Considered Suicide / When the Rainbow Is Enuf by Ntozake Shange and Waiting to Exhale by Terry McMillan 'STRAND SELECT V 1st place Sponsor, Brian Strand

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Date: 6/27/2018 8:07:00 PM
Sian, congratulations on your win. Nicely done and very beautiful . Hugs Eve ~`*
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Janis Thompson
Date: 6/28/2018 10:31:00 AM
Thanks Eve. Glad to hear from you.
Date: 6/25/2018 11:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this creative poem in only 7 lines. Well done!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 6/26/2018 10:33:00 AM
Thanks Susan.
Date: 6/25/2018 6:50:00 AM
Nice take on the contest Sian.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Janis Thompson
Date: 6/25/2018 11:54:00 AM
Thanks Silent One. I thank you for not kicking my lack of the heart dropping love, love, love experience to the curb. I just don't think that's a part of my generation and culture.
Date: 6/22/2018 8:43:00 AM
Oh I love this. Fabulous write Sian, my best to you in the contest! xomo
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Janis Thompson
Date: 6/22/2018 1:06:00 PM
Thanks lots Maureen.
Date: 6/22/2018 6:43:00 AM
Great write.. hope you do well in the contest!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 6/22/2018 1:07:00 PM
Good to hear from you again. Thanks

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