For Amadeus

Stray with flamed music along bay’s shoreline Give in to notes playing among the sand As fingers dart symphony’s rush, I pine Caress your tinted strokes written longhand As I feel allegros bursting moon’s shine Give in to notes playing among the sand How can frail youth’s light steal your brightened face Although your bones lie in common man’s grave World slain by Requiem, time can’t erase Smile gently now from brief life lost and craved Embrace the thought, your name carries blessed praise Although your bones lie in common man’s grave Your depth, Amadeus, keeps breath ablaze Heart touching keys, your passion beyond reach Embrace the thought, your name carries blessed praise While centuries resound what you beseech Stray with flamed music along bay’s shoreline Heart touching keys,your passion beyond reach As fingers dart symphony’s rush, I pine. -------- Debbie's Dying Young Contest *Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart (27 January 1756 – 5 December 1791), age 35 by nette onclaud
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Guzzi Avatar
June 2, 2013 at 6:39 PM
Just full of life as we have all come to expect from you, a fine work. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Tacito Avatar
June 2, 2013 at 7:41 AM
An excellent tribute to a timeless human being. Wonderfully done!
Kendrick Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 5:31 PM
Great winning work..Congrats on your winning lines..Sara
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 3:37 AM
hi and congrats nette love, well done xx
Harper Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 8:05 PM
Nette, you have embraced Mozart's music and the tragic loss in this wonderful poem. Congratulations on your win!
Oyewole Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 10:02 AM
A heartfelt and well written. Congrats to you on your well deserved win Nette . AO
Richards Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 9:22 AM
I have found it so with artists of such kind........to leave behind such a legacy it seems they will never really be lost. The music lives on.....as will your beautiful poetry.....forever and ever.
Ober Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 8:03 AM
Absolutely stunning, Nette! Big congrats on your win :)
Calubiran Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 7:25 PM
Nice poem ate Nette. proud to be Filipino!
Guzzi Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 1:47 PM
Soup mail nette-kins L & L
Poet Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 11:41 AM
A great poem and wonderful tribute to Mozart here Nette!Enjoyed the read very much.
Goff Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 9:40 AM
Nette...love the rush of symphonic acceleration to peaks unseen....your last lines....to mine faves....as Ruben would say! and thanks, always, for your sweet feedback....jimbo
Lamoureux Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 7:43 AM
You have a way of creating sweet music with your words. You are the perfect poet to honor Mozart. Well done.
Andresen Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 7:14 AM
- W.A.M. ..... smiling to you .... He is proud to have a gloriously poem in 2013! - Good luck in the contest, Nette. - Have a nice day my friend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 6:36 AM
Great work honoring Mozart..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Sivey Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 6:15 AM
What a tremendous and fabulous write my friend! What a glorious and time enhanced poem! My favorite line has to be, "Heart touching keys, your passion beyond reach" this is a perfect line here Nette! What a lovely piece, such a harmonious poem, Great Work!!
Trifiatis Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 3:43 AM
I think if God had to chose a composer for to write nature's symphony, it would be extremely difficult Not to chose Mozart. Your marvelous poem, a symphony of words, is worthy of Amadeus' genius!
Calubiran Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 3:31 AM
35 not so young afterall
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