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Stray with flamed music along bay’s shoreline Give in to notes playing among the sand As fingers dart symphony’s rush, I pine Caress your tinted strokes written longhand As I feel allegros bursting moon’s shine Give in to notes playing among the sand How can frail youth’s light steal your brightened face Although your bones lie in common man’s grave World slain by Requiem, time can’t erase Smile gently now from brief life lost and craved Embrace the thought, your name carries blessed praise Although your bones lie in common man’s grave Your depth, Amadeus, keeps breath ablaze Heart touching keys, your passion beyond reach Embrace the thought, your name carries blessed praise While centuries resound what you beseech Stray with flamed music along bay’s shoreline Heart touching keys,your passion beyond reach As fingers dart symphony’s rush, I pine. -------- Debbie's Dying Young Contest *Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart (27 January 1756 – 5 December 1791), age 35 by nette onclaud

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Date: 6/2/2013 6:39:00 PM
Just full of life as we have all come to expect from you, a fine work. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/2/2013 7:41:00 AM
An excellent tribute to a timeless human being. Wonderfully done!
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Date: 6/1/2013 5:31:00 PM
Great winning work..Congrats on your winning lines..Sara
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Date: 6/1/2013 3:37:00 AM
hi and congrats nette love, well done xx
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Date: 5/31/2013 8:05:00 PM
Nette, you have embraced Mozart's music and the tragic loss in this wonderful poem. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/31/2013 10:02:00 AM
A heartfelt and well written. Congrats to you on your well deserved win Nette . AO
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Date: 5/31/2013 9:22:00 AM
I have found it so with artists of such kind........to leave behind such a legacy it seems they will never really be lost. The music lives on.....as will your beautiful poetry.....forever and ever.
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Date: 5/31/2013 8:03:00 AM
Absolutely stunning, Nette! Big congrats on your win :)
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Date: 5/30/2013 7:25:00 PM
Nice poem ate Nette. proud to be Filipino!
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Date: 5/30/2013 1:47:00 PM
Soup mail nette-kins L & L
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Date: 5/30/2013 11:41:00 AM
A great poem and wonderful tribute to Mozart here Nette!Enjoyed the read very much.
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Date: 5/30/2013 9:40:00 AM
Nette...love the rush of symphonic acceleration to peaks unseen....your last lines....to mine faves....as Ruben would say! and thanks, always, for your sweet feedback....jimbo
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Date: 5/30/2013 7:43:00 AM
You have a way of creating sweet music with your words. You are the perfect poet to honor Mozart. Well done.
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Date: 5/30/2013 7:14:00 AM
- W.A.M. ..... smiling to you .... He is proud to have a gloriously poem in 2013! - Good luck in the contest, Nette. - Have a nice day my friend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/30/2013 6:36:00 AM
Great work honoring Mozart..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 5/30/2013 6:15:00 AM
What a tremendous and fabulous write my friend! What a glorious and time enhanced poem! My favorite line has to be, "Heart touching keys, your passion beyond reach" this is a perfect line here Nette! What a lovely piece, such a harmonious poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 5/30/2013 3:43:00 AM
I think if God had to chose a composer for to write nature's symphony, it would be extremely difficult Not to chose Mozart. Your marvelous poem, a symphony of words, is worthy of Amadeus' genius!
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Date: 5/30/2013 3:31:00 AM
35 not so young afterall
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