For a Woman's Love

For a Woman’s Love 

When you chose to walk away from me, 
swaying those seductive hips, 
hand in hand with my ‘trusted ally’, 
you took with you something 
more precious than pleasure. 

When you chose to walk away from me, 
did you consider what comes next? 
Did you not see me on a rampage 
of blood lust and bleeding honor? 

Did you even spare a thought, 
to the souls who wander 
aimlessly in asphodel 
because you chose to walk away? 

When you chose to walk away from me 
did you think that I would pine 
or seek relief in self-inflicted death? 

I saved my sword for better use, 
to hunt and seek my full revenge. 
That’s why I sought my allies’ help 
according to the oath once sworn 
by those who came from far and wide 
to seek your hand in marriage. 

How could I let the Prince of Troy 
seduce, abduct and twist your mind 
With devious words and flattery! 

Because you chose to walk away from me, 
I had to stand and watch my men fall. 
They shed their precious blood, 
for my unworthy cause, 
slaughtered in the war, 
between honor and lust. 

And now that justice has been done 
Revenge attained, your love regained, 
We shall ride home to start afresh, 
We, descendants of the gods… 
Menelaus and Helen, Rulers of Sparta! 

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/3/2016 12:01:00 PM
Hi Angie! Pleased to see this poem already getting visits and comments. Thank you for your unexpected yet lovely invite:) It was fun working with you. Have a lovely weekend...and make the most of your holidays:) // paul
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Date: 6/4/2016 1:53:00 AM
Thank you Paul... Yes it was quite lovely working with you too. enjoy your weekend :)
Date: 6/3/2016 10:25:00 AM
What a tremendous collaboration! Well done.
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Date: 6/3/2016 10:35:00 AM
Awww thank you Richard, honored to have you drop by as always. hugs, Angie :)
Date: 6/3/2016 10:24:00 AM
Being Greek could not remain indifferent to Homer's story retold so creatively by the two of you: Angie and Paul, Paul and Angie! Beware for Homer may become jealous of your collaboration! A seven to each of you, for love deserves the best a heart can offer!
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Date: 6/3/2016 10:36:00 AM
hahahaha awww Demetrios, I am so honored to have you give such positive feedback on a topic of cultural significance to yourself. Thank you. Hugs, Angie :)
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