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Footle----Invitation

See you soon

This afternoon!


dunno if it's done right, plz help....lol.....always maryam*

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Robin L. Gass

February 12, 2009 at 4:20 PM

Well, this is cute. I know you know hoe to do it now. Sorry I missed this before! Its a practice footle!

Carrie Richards

February 6, 2009 at 12:31 PM

Looks good to me:) !! Carrie

Christopher Higgins

February 6, 2009 at 12:01 PM

I dunno if its done right either but it is good..keep up the good work.

Michael Jordan

February 6, 2009 at 11:53 AM

Maryam - I can't answer that but it makes sense to me - god Bless, MJ

Michael Degenhardt

February 6, 2009 at 11:08 AM

I totally agree with Deirdre, the rhyme and idea are great, in fact excellent reading. Give it another shot, you'll do great. Michael

Deirdre Omaidin

February 6, 2009 at 11:02 AM

Maryam!. idea great, rhyming perfect BUT you can only have 2 syllables in each line and the content must be reflected in the name of what you are doing the footle on. So you should express that in the title. Go again and you will have the perfect footle before the night is out. I am only an amateur but that's my understanding of it. Déirdre

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