Footle... Young Love .

First kiss

Pure bliss .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 11:16 PM
Great
Denny Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 7:45 AM
short yet sweet.
Negrete Avatar
November 25, 2015 at 9:00 AM
Love it
Dietrich Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 11:02 PM
Ahhh, I leave your poems now with this nice romantic one!
George   Avatar
October 29, 2009 at 9:37 AM
AS DANE ANN SAID 'PERFECTION'. THIS GOES ON MY FAVORITE LIST, SEAN. LOVE, LAINIE
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
August 18, 2009 at 11:52 AM
Perfection!!! One I missed. Smiling, DAS-J
Gass Avatar
February 14, 2009 at 7:24 AM
Sweet air.......love's there! Valentines Ball at the castle tonight, 10pm sharp! Happy Valentines Day, my dear Mr. Kelly! The Queen of Hearts
Heck Avatar
January 26, 2009 at 9:16 AM
Hey Sean - you're really, really good at these Footle's - I liked this one especially. Peace always, John
Ginn Avatar
January 25, 2009 at 11:22 AM
Big smiles, ya never forget it. Laurie
White Avatar
January 23, 2009 at 3:06 PM
yes the first one is always the best, hi Sean and thanks for your comments, hope this finds you well, take care D-nyce
Degenhardt Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 5:04 AM
Oh I can xstill remember mine clearly even though it seems like eons ago. I like this read and the memories it brought back. Michael
Strand Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 12:04 AM
Been there... done that.Nice one Sean.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Buys Avatar
January 20, 2009 at 11:34 AM
You have this wonderful talent to lift your readers spirit and bring a smile with your words. Long may you footle. Love Heidie
Winter Avatar
January 20, 2009 at 6:35 AM
~lol~ You and Fred! : ) Sean, this is perfect. I remember two first kisses, my very first which was seriously gross (he was a jerk and I was too young), and the first my husband and I ever shared which is your poem exactly. Pure bliss. Excellent footle! Love, Shar
Gass Avatar
January 20, 2009 at 6:01 AM
Awesome write. Four words that say so much. Conjures sweet memories. Love, Robin
Reynolds Avatar
January 20, 2009 at 3:05 AM
Ahhh, there is NOTHING, i mean nothing in the whole universe, like that first, sparking kiss...beautiful footle Sean, lovely!!!!!!! Love, me and LOL to Fred.
Kelly Avatar
January 20, 2009 at 2:46 AM
I'm still waiting , Fred , in " blissful " purity !!
Derequito Avatar
January 20, 2009 at 2:32 AM
You don't tell me, Sean, that you just experienced your first kiss this late in life. Imagine, a 50-something chap just having his first kiss! So what have you been doing all this time, Sean? But then again, better late than never! LOL Regards, Fred
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