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Cymbals crash- jars ears Marching line, loud metal sounds. Football season starts.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 2/29/2024 9:15:00 AM
Very insightful Hilda. My goodness, even the newscasters who cover sports carry on with incredible volume. It's really just show business and a lot of people enjoy it. I read a lot of the comments...it goes to prove how popular it is. You struck a nerve for sure, which I always love seeing. BTW, thanks for your comment today.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/9/2024 7:16:00 PM
I don't care for the loud sounds, but it seems to bring out the sporting mood.
Date: 1/15/2024 1:29:00 PM
I wonder what happens to adults who once played in a high school, college, and professional marching band. Do they go death? Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/9/2024 7:15:00 PM
Musical instruments are a talent. Those who can master the art have opportunities that are limitless.
Date: 11/27/2023 7:15:00 PM
I happen to be listening to a football game right now. Only do so out of habit, and only listen to the home team now. I find it so boring. Who cares? -- Apparently, I do, at least enough to listen with one ear. Smiles, gw
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/28/2023 2:02:00 AM
There are almost too many teams now. Football has become commercial with an emphasis on money. I like the Pittsburgh Steelers because they are a home based team.
Date: 11/15/2023 11:10:00 AM
Yes, just like anew. And I do like simple and short. You made a very quick point of it!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/15/2023 7:14:00 PM
Thanks.
Date: 11/10/2023 1:05:00 PM
A lovely senryu, rich in thrilling sights and sounds. Well done, Hilda. :)
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/10/2023 6:45:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 11/9/2023 8:54:00 PM
I sure know those sounds. My man are all football fans. I use to watch my husband sit in his recliner as he was one in the field playing football. He'd also lose his temper when a wrong was made. It was hilarious. Great imagery in you Senryu, Hilda.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/10/2023 6:44:00 PM
Thank you. Football fans can become animated. it's always noisy.
Date: 11/3/2023 2:26:00 PM
Put me in the mood for football, JB. Thanks for sharing your Senryu with us. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/3/2023 4:26:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 11/2/2023 12:53:00 PM
Well done! I’m ready for the game.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/2/2023 3:03:00 PM
Many fans are anticipating the game, as well as looking forward to nice march renditions. May your favorite team do well.
Date: 11/2/2023 5:11:00 AM
Yes indeed. Football season and many wives rue the day but it's also Hockey season and some of the women are worse than the men. Good job her. God Bless, JB
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/2/2023 5:47:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 11/1/2023 3:00:00 PM
marvellous, the spirit of football, i love this sport
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/1/2023 3:04:00 PM
A noisy sport, it is. Thank you for the comment.
Date: 11/1/2023 12:29:00 AM
Very well written haiku! You write on various themes and subjects in the form of haiku so very creatively! Impressive! Pleasure reading you
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/1/2023 7:14:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 10/31/2023 10:42:00 PM
Well done Hilda. That's football at it's best. Nice job,. God Bless, JB
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/1/2023 7:14:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 10/31/2023 2:04:00 PM
true, football starts with a bang, especially here in Texas. Football is 'king' here. Liked your Senyru. have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/31/2023 3:17:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 10/31/2023 12:24:00 PM
Love the cacophonous write…right on season!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/31/2023 1:12:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 10/31/2023 9:58:00 AM
Well-composed Haiku, you convey the picture of football and the excited supporters so well in just a few syllables.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/31/2023 10:06:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 10/31/2023 9:19:00 AM
Oh, all the football widows! What the heck. You hooked me with the first Cymbal Crash, a lifelong amateur drummer. Love it!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/31/2023 10:06:00 AM
Thank you. Don't ever give up the drums.
Date: 10/31/2023 9:13:00 AM
I have never seen a US football, only the UK soccer. Can understand the noise though. Lovely haiku. Blessings.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/31/2023 10:05:00 AM
Thank you.

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