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Fools In Love

FOOLS IN LOVE To feel the talk of fools from such as you, the slicing of the heart, your cutting knife has brought me to this end we're going through, forever now to die, all of my life. *** I set you loose but you've refused to go from out of where I've put you in my mind, and though you've told me why, I'll never know, except you still enjoy what grief you find. *** Though all the talk I've heard still takes my breath, I can't believe I love you more than this, to rise above your words that brought my death, and still say, "I love you, in spite of this." *** You ask what manner of a fool this fool might be to love you as I do? The song of me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/3/2011 8:00:00 AM
You just keep singing that song, Oh Great one
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Date: 4/2/2011 7:51:00 PM
there was a song back in the 50's or maybe it was the 60's called why do fools fall in love, this poem reminded me of that song. I enjoyed reading your piece of great poetry, moved real well and kept my attention.
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Date: 4/2/2011 4:23:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today and I'm looking forward to reading more. Take care of yourself. Dana'lynn
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