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Only with hope unearthed by will can true treasure come to be And but through impassioned eyes could such fascination see A caressing glimmer of desire caught by one heart lends it truth Found in its natural state it would beguile the purest blood of youth Prospects of wealth that brings true joy is not wasted in the mind Only stones unturned will ever know the dreams one left behind In the softness of these hardened hands faith's pleasure pleads to hold Such grains that gleam unknown by most except in this Fool's Gold. Fool's Gold Contest Sponsored by Julia Ward 11/11/2016

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Date: 1/8/2017 7:39:00 AM
Excellent. Well done. A sure winner. moog.
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Date: 1/8/2017 8:00:00 AM
Thank you again Peter...
Date: 12/16/2016 6:10:00 AM
Very good take on the theme. Fabulous poem. Congrats!
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Date: 12/16/2016 12:07:00 PM
Thank you my friend...
Date: 12/6/2016 10:34:00 PM
Exquisitely eloquent, congrats Charlie.
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Date: 12/7/2016 7:48:00 AM
Thanks again Paloma...
Date: 11/28/2016 9:19:00 AM
A beautiful poem ... Congratulations for the win in the contest ...
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Date: 11/28/2016 9:49:00 AM
Thank you Probir...
Date: 11/28/2016 7:29:00 AM
This is really good! Heavy on the "first place" potential. Thanks for the read.
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Date: 11/28/2016 9:49:00 AM
Thank you Samuel...
Date: 11/27/2016 8:06:00 AM
Hi Charlie, Good take on the contest theme. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 11/28/2016 9:48:00 AM
Thank you Alexis...
Date: 11/26/2016 8:20:00 PM
These are lovely words. A great write. A 7 Congratulations.
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Date: 11/26/2016 8:47:00 PM
Thank you Janis...
Date: 11/26/2016 10:18:00 AM
A 7 for your great WINNING poem, Charlie--full of memorable imagery! Janice
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Date: 11/26/2016 10:34:00 AM
You are very kind Janice, thank you...
Date: 11/26/2016 9:32:00 AM
A beautiful poem, well put together. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/26/2016 10:00:00 AM
Thanks Heidi...
Date: 11/13/2016 11:12:00 PM
Wisdom, beauty and great style represented in this very creative piece. A7
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Date: 11/14/2016 6:24:00 AM
Thank you Robert...
Date: 11/13/2016 12:55:00 PM
This is truly beautiful poetry Charlie, Golden even!
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Date: 11/14/2016 6:25:00 AM
You are very kind Arthur, thank you...
Date: 11/13/2016 12:29:00 PM
You have a wonderful way of constructing each line of poetry, Charlie. Lovely poem! ...Fran
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Date: 11/13/2016 12:40:00 PM
Thanks for your encouragement Fran...
Date: 11/13/2016 9:34:00 AM
Deep and lovely poem, Charlie. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/13/2016 12:39:00 PM
Thank you Andrea...
Date: 11/12/2016 10:29:00 AM
love the picture and love the verse very stunning . Paul said it best a result of age put to good use Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/13/2016 12:38:00 PM
Thank you for those lovely words Eve...
Date: 11/12/2016 9:46:00 AM
This is lovely, Charlie, and I bow to your wise words...a result of age put to good use! Regards // paul
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Date: 11/13/2016 12:37:00 PM
Thank you Paul...
Date: 11/11/2016 6:59:00 PM
"Only stones unturned will ever know the dreams one left behind" is so touching to me.
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Date: 11/11/2016 10:26:00 PM
Thank you for your kindness Sunlite...
Date: 11/11/2016 4:01:00 PM
Charlie, this is a great one!
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Date: 11/11/2016 9:58:00 PM
You are very kind Heidi, thank you...
Date: 11/11/2016 3:56:00 PM
Very well written Charlie. I really enjoyed this one
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Date: 11/11/2016 9:57:00 PM
So glad you did Chris, thank you...

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