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Fools Game

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Below is the poem entitled Fools Game which was written by poet Christina Belous. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Fools Game

Ignorance that plays a fool
Leaves pity in it wake
Fearing what became of you
The role was free to take.

Finding truth within your game
I sought out all your gold
Seeking for your promised lies
Your hate had clearly told

Praying that Id stay alive
This game had wicked turns
listening for a reason why
The answer wasn't heard.

Time elapsed before my eyes
No change was clear to show
Deepened with a sense to strive
Depression told me no

The one who cared to fool around
Had made a different game
Leading to a different fight
That showed a different play.

In time you'll know that fool was me
I learned to overcome
Learning to be a better me
and knowing games are dumb.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 10/10/2017 9:57:00 PM
Love this!
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Christina Belous
Date: 10/13/2017 10:23:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 10/10/2017 6:46:00 PM
I love the flow of your poem. Very well done. I have a very similiar style when I write.
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Christina Belous
Date: 10/13/2017 10:25:00 PM
I find it easier to express what I want to say when there is a rhythm to it! Thank you I appreciate it!