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Human written on 8/13/2025 for PIck-A-Title Vol 54 Poetry Contest sponsored by Edward Ibeh

From his bottle, Grandpa took a sip. 
I gazed sleepily at his bottle ship. 
Grandpa said that life could be so cruel. 
Grandma said, your grandpa is a fool. 
Grandpa ran his mouth from his chair and
Grandma said he always runs a fool's errand.
Grandpa said he sought the Holy Grail, 
but he came up empty without fail. 
Grandpa's poured out tales, an ocean deep. 
The bottle ship, soon gone, and I, asleep. 

Soon, I was a fisherman in a dream,
fishing for happiness in a saltwater bream,
The bream said, "I'll give you a little tip -
happiness. through your hands, will always slip". 
I tried to catch freedom in a sailing fish, 
but he flew away, along with that futile wish. 
So, I tried to catch tuna, the fish of truth,
and came up with just a fallacy of youth. 
Next I looked for beauty in the marlin,
but she put me down, "take a hike, darlin". 
The fish of justice, my next angling goal,
took money while reading from a scroll.
Ah, so money must be the fish to grab -
but, sick and unloved, I picked up the tab.
Every fish and thing I strived for was a joke, 
and one by one they all went up in smoke.
All the fish in my dream were just a school 
to teach that searching is the errand of a fool.

When I awoke, my Grandpa, too, was snoring,
Grandma said, "to himself, he's even boring". 
I decided then, I would make my life at sea -
to catch anything, there'd be no guarantee.
I don't know anything worth anything anyway,  
except the ocean's sand and salty spray.

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Date: 8/13/2025 4:43:00 PM
some noteworthy lines that caught my eye as you told this story via poetry: he fish of truth, and came up with just a fallacy of youth....fish of justice, my next angling goal, This poem is definitely FAV worthy!
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Date: 8/13/2025 3:14:00 PM
Some excellent writing, dear David! Reality and Dreaming, merge. Your poem is good through and through. Not throwing back the fish but faving ;)
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