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Foolishness on a Sunday Morning

Foolishness On a Sunday Morning Now that guy's too old To go without a shirt; His hair is white, His belly like dirt. But there's something in The twinkle of his eye, That turns my head, Even though I'm shy. I think he's not too old for me; I'll smile at him, And then we'll see. If he smiles back, I think I'll buy him a shirt, But probably not pink.

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Date: 9/1/2018 10:03:00 PM
Awwww - what a sweet piece! This guy might just have been a prince in disguise! Great write, my friend! Love it. Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 8/29/2018 12:53:00 PM
The endearing charm of your poem made me happy, Sunlite. A wonderful and enjoyable lighthearted beauty. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/23/2018 12:12:00 AM
Sunlite, your fun read had a few interesting twist.. much enjoyed!
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Date: 8/21/2018 12:46:00 AM
Pretty in pink!...cute write my friend...love & pink...^WW^
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/21/2018 10:17:00 AM
A warrior in pink? Thank you for commenting on my goofy poem.
Date: 8/20/2018 10:20:00 AM
You have fun with this piece from start to finish and it brings a smile to my day. Emile.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/21/2018 10:14:00 AM
Thank you so much, Emile!
Date: 8/20/2018 6:12:00 AM
Sunlite, I loved your Foolishness!!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/21/2018 10:15:00 AM
I have to get goofy sometimes, LM. Thank you!!!
Date: 8/19/2018 7:59:00 PM
hahaha.. he might like pink.. except make sure he isn't a little offfffff
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/21/2018 10:12:00 AM
Pink shirts were a fad back in the '70's! Thanks for dipping in and commenting. I do appreciate it.
Date: 8/19/2018 3:30:00 PM
Haha I think this is adorable! Love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 8/19/2018 2:06:00 PM
This really is cute and charming, SW.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/21/2018 10:07:00 AM
Thank you, Dale.
Date: 8/19/2018 11:35:00 AM
Ha ha, a cute one
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/21/2018 10:06:00 AM
Thank you, Richard.
Date: 8/19/2018 10:41:00 AM
Charming! It made me smile ! Good to start the day dear, SW. Certainly not pink ! Haha!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/21/2018 10:06:00 AM
Thank you!!!