Fool of a Poet

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the times I've been here, words in hand
          mind-sculpting verse of phrases, grand
               that speak of that, the cruelest school
     those moments, rife, I've played a fool ...

laid bare this soul, with one broad knife
          sweet dreams of romance, love and life
               my heart bled, staining some girl's feet
     whose care for me was ne'er as sweet ...

and shared in poems for worlds to read
          midst hopes they might just fill a need
               while all I've done, with sheet and pen
     is prove I'm that damned fool ... again ...

the deepest feelings - spilled for those
          I loved and lost, who thumb their nose
               at odes brought forth, or all such gems
     so polished smooth with tears, for them ...

it's always me, this pining schmuck
          that's tumbled down on lover's luck
               now writing chiseled stanzas, meant
     for some fair lass whose love I spent ...

why won't the sweetest phrase impart
          some love to make those longings start
               for ME - this fool with one chance, slim ...
     some sweet fool writes a poem ... for HIM.




Written on February 16, 2021

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Date: 3/4/2021 2:16:00 AM
Great poem of recognition, Greg; that our words, and thereby soul, is there for all to see, naked in its remains. If only we could be as "foolish" as you to create such wonderful poetry. Awesome.
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Date: 3/1/2021 8:07:00 AM
Another wonderful gem G. Somehow I feel drawn to these lost love rhymes, maybe the past surfaces subconsciously, loved the phrasing as always, you do have a way with words dear poet! Btw how's the music coming along?
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Date: 2/26/2021 4:27:00 AM
A very beautiful gift, especially for the lovelorn. I am putting this gem into my faves Greg. It’s wonderful to read your work again. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/17/2021 12:38:00 PM
oh and here it is in your poetry section. This poetry pierces the heart, Greg. If you were entering your own contest, that last stanza would stand alone so well on its own !
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Date: 2/17/2021 9:05:00 AM
Greg: Such beautiful flow to your words. The first line brilliant, equating words as a gift. Thanks for my placement in your recent contest. I appreciate you. SuZ
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Date: 2/16/2021 9:02:00 PM
Find me the fool Greg, he ain't here, having lost in love brings out pure poetry at it's best...My opinion of course, from reading this gem...If for the contest good luck. It will do well i'm sure
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Date: 2/16/2021 5:22:00 AM
Is this for a contest? What poet has not at one time or another had doubts. It is the nature of laying ones soul bare that allows the arrows of doubt to enter. Your phrase-- " mind-sculpting verse of phrases," could have read heart-sculpting. Truly excellent poem my friend. A fav.. God bless..
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