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Fool Me Once

Is there anything more unforgivable than betrayal by a friend That sacred trust and bond that shatters in the end The witch actually asked me to leave my fiancé To match me up with her brother the next day I supposed she thought I should be flattered She just left me in a daze befuddled and smattered Beyond crossing the line I’d say she dipped and swerved I wish I could say that I dropped her like she deserved But no I pretended it never happened and kept my smile And merely let that sour friendship run its last mile Submitted on July 28, 2018 for contest FOOL ME ONCE sponsored by BRENDA CHIRI - RANKED 9TH

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Date: 9/4/2018 5:41:00 AM
Betrayal, a word that should be left out of our vocabulary. Nice write, Line! Congrats on your win...Charlie
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Date: 9/5/2018 12:21:00 PM
Indeed, betrayal should not exist... It's definitely the worst. Thanks for your visit and comment, Charles.
Date: 9/4/2018 12:29:00 AM
Congratulations, Line on your win.
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Date: 9/5/2018 12:22:00 PM
Thanks, Subimal. Much appreciated.
Date: 7/29/2018 2:47:00 PM
Yes you want to give up the false friendship as fast as possible - really enjoyed reading this!
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Date: 7/29/2018 4:37:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle. Good advice.
Date: 7/29/2018 12:52:00 PM
And then? You have not left your fiance. but left her. So you are not fooled.
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Date: 7/29/2018 5:00:00 PM
Definitely dropped her !! Line xx
Date: 7/28/2018 9:32:00 PM
right right....but what happened next?
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Date: 7/28/2018 11:31:00 PM
You'll just have to wait till the sequel. LOL

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