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Food Glorious Food

Sizzling succulent sirloin Crispy golden fries Sautéed mushrooms piled up high Tossed dressed green salad Knife and fork ready Just divine Mine! 10~26~14 Contest: Make me drool Epulaeryu Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich ~awarded 1st place~

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Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/16/2014 2:29:00 PM

Why am I hungry now? Congratulations on your big win Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/16/2014 2:31:00 PM

I put on a kilo just reading the winners Brenda lol - many thanks for dropping by:-) Hugs jan xxx

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/16/2014 10:11:00 AM

Jan, congratulations for your top win for your delicious, all American favorite "glorious food" poem! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 11/16/2014 10:37:00 AM

thanks so much Sandra - having never celebrated Thanksgiving i just went with what I would like:-) Hugs jan xx

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/15/2014 8:28:00 PM

Congratulations on your delicious top win.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/16/2014 3:16:00 AM

Thanks so much Joyce:-) Hugs Jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/15/2014 5:05:00 PM

Hi Jan, returning with huge congratulations on you top win! Well-deserved! Pandita

Jan Allison
Date: 11/15/2014 5:08:00 PM

Thanks Pandita i so enjoyed reading the winning poems made me feel so hungry though lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/15/2014 10:01:00 AM

Yum !!! Welll done, Jan !!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/15/2014 10:28:00 AM

Thanks so much Carrie:-) Hugs Jan x

Roy Jerden

Date: 11/15/2014 8:58:00 AM

Back for congratulations! Cheers, Roy

Jan Allison
Date: 11/15/2014 10:28:00 AM

Thanks so much Roy:-) Hugs Jan x

Joseph May

Date: 11/15/2014 7:40:00 AM

Congrats on a great win Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 11/15/2014 8:01:00 AM

Many thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Earl Schumacker

Date: 11/15/2014 7:20:00 AM

Good morning Jan, Perfect food. Perfect poem. Great win. Well done all around. Yum! Have a great week end. I hope you have fun! Earl

Jan Allison
Date: 11/15/2014 8:01:00 AM

Thanks Earl i had fun reading all the winning entries made me feel so hungry though! hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 11/15/2014 5:57:00 AM

I am sure I posted a comment on this one before! but can't find one. Anyway, it sounded great before and it's still appetizing now:) Congratulations on your top placing!! hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 11/15/2014 6:35:00 AM

I know you did Paul! I too have had issues recently of commenting and them disappearing - anyway lovely to see you as ever and thanks :-) Hugs jan xx

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/15/2014 4:24:00 AM

This sold itself,form title till the last word ,it is just wonderful; congrats Jan...huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 11/15/2014 6:33:00 AM

Thanks so much Kayod5 I actually think the title is as important as the body of the poem:-) Hugs jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/15/2014 12:49:00 AM

Sounds wonderful. Congratulations and Happy Thanksgiving. Love & prayers, Gina

Jan Allison
Date: 11/15/2014 3:14:00 AM

Thanks so much for the great news Regina:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/14/2014 11:07:00 PM

Jan, This was my favorite meal of ALL the meals. You must know me very well. The fries helped a lot. Without them, I would have put this lower. hahaha. Anyway, I LOVE your entry. I was thinking you did one of the sillier ones for me since you told me yours was silly, didn't you? I was really surprised to see you here in first place. WAY to GO!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/15/2014 3:17:00 AM

Thanks Andrea -I considered my entry 'silly 'as I have no idea what a thanksgiving meal would be like so I just wrote what I'd like on the day -I am so glad you like it and and so made up with my win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sneha Rv

Date: 11/6/2014 8:46:00 AM

AHHHHHHH! How tempting - You will surely win! I am happy you liked it but mine could have been more tempting c:

Jan Allison
Date: 11/15/2014 3:18:00 AM

Sirloin is a cut of steak:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sneha Rv
Date: 11/6/2014 9:16:00 AM

I didn't know what sirloin was - Thought it was some kind of noodles!!

Sneha Rv
Date: 11/6/2014 9:15:00 AM

Not really - Your poem tempted me - And I am a vegetarian! Ha ha! c:

Jan Allison
Date: 11/6/2014 9:11:00 AM

lol guess a vegetarian wouldn't lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Sneha Rv
Date: 11/6/2014 8:52:00 AM

Nobody can not drool at this!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/5/2014 6:55:00 AM

I think this is a very good entry for andrea's contest; I like the bit of rhyme you've managed to get in there...I think these very short forms are proving to be a forte of yours, jan - good luck! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/5/2014 6:58:00 AM

Thank you so much Charlotte I truly do value your opinion - I am still learning and I do love the encouragement you give:-) Hugs Jan xx

Roy Jerden

Date: 11/2/2014 6:19:00 AM

Oh yeah! I'm drooling (maybe because I can't eat much beef). Good luck in the contest!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/2/2014 10:20:00 AM

Thanks Roy - I'm feeling hungry now re-reading this one lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/31/2014 4:56:00 AM

only yours!!!!!! won't you share some too.. :D!!!! love it Jan..!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2014 9:05:00 AM

Of course I will share Olive but maybe not the mushrooms I adore them :-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/27/2014 8:36:00 AM

Mouthwatering Jan! Sure to place high! Gl in contest!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/27/2014 9:34:00 AM

Hi Dr Sharma. I know nothing about thanksgiving so just went with what I would like:-) Hugs jan xxx

Roy Jerden

Date: 10/27/2014 6:52:00 AM

She'll love this one! Good luck!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/27/2014 7:31:00 AM

I hope so Roy:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/27/2014 6:16:00 AM

Great meal! Great write! It's Just divine. Better than Mine!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/27/2014 7:30:00 AM

Mine is the main course - you are dessert Maurice! Hugs jan xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/27/2014 6:12:00 AM

This is a fantastic Epulaeryu that sharpens one's appetite! I do not know if I give you a seven for verse but you get a double seven for thanksgiving dinner! Please, invite me dear, Jan, I am starving! Don't let, Tim, eat the whole thing! Great work, hugs!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/27/2014 7:30:00 AM

Thank you so much Demetrios - we don't celebrate thanksgiving here so i just went with what I'd like to eat:-)Oh wouldn't it be wonderful if we could all meet up at a huge Soup party! :-) hugs Jan xxx

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/26/2014 10:24:00 PM

So nice to read your verse this evening. Light & Love

Jan Allison
Date: 10/27/2014 3:01:00 AM

Thanks Debbie:-) Hugs Jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/26/2014 7:42:00 PM

Now I am drooling! I want that steak and all the fixings with it! Thanks for making me feel really greedy:-)lol. Outstanding piece - surely a big winner! Pandita

Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2014 7:44:00 PM

I hope its ok for the contest - not having celebrated thanksgiving its quite a tough call:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/26/2014 7:32:00 PM

Hi Jan, wow...a full-course meal ready to go, and it sounds divine! Best of luck in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2014 7:36:00 PM

We don't have thanksgiving here Sandra so I thought I'd go with what I'd like lol hugs Jan xx