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Food For the Trees

piercing rays of light overwhelms the green giants in the old, dark woods

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2010 9:15:00 PM

Nicely done. Congratulations!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/2/2010 3:32:00 PM

Congrats Brandee on your winning poem in Haiku You contest.. a wonderful write..enjoy your big win.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Rick Parise

Date: 6/2/2010 2:38:00 PM

congrats to you on your placement in my contest ~Rick~~Very nice

Joyce Johnson

Date: 12/1/2009 6:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your hm in the contest. Love, Joyce

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/27/2009 11:37:00 AM

Congratulations Brandee, on your success Raul Moreno’s “Ascension” contest with this lovely haiku. (…Sorry to be so late. Don’t they say better late than never? I’m finally reading these winners. xoxoxox) . Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/26/2009 1:53:00 PM

Hey Brandee, Are you talking abort those giant redwood green giants? And oh how beautiful they are with the light shining though... As are southern forests as well. I enjoyed your haiku. Happy Thanksgiving. Love to you, Dane Ann

James Fraser

Date: 11/25/2009 10:13:00 AM

Excellent Haiku Brandee, big congrats on your winning piece in Raul's contest >> James

Brian Strand

Date: 11/24/2009 11:40:00 PM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Brandee.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words & comments today.

Date: 11/24/2009 2:16:00 PM

Brandee, I just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your win in Raul's contest to my other comment. Way to go! Enjoy your honor. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving! Karen

Elaine George

Date: 11/24/2009 3:37:00 AM

Beautiful Haiky, dear Brandee. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Love, Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/24/2009 3:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Ascension contest Brandee. Love, Carol

Donna Golden

Date: 11/23/2009 11:17:00 PM

Congrats, Brandee, on your win in Raul's contest! Hugs, Donna

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/23/2009 9:44:00 PM

Congrats, Brandee, on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. well deserved honor.. blessings ... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Raul Moreno

Date: 11/23/2009 9:29:00 PM

Brandee, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul

Mary Cummings

Date: 11/23/2009 8:39:00 AM

I am not a Haiku fan, but I liked this! Thanks for your comment on my poem. I talk to God every day; usually he's the only one listening to me!!! :) Mary

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/22/2009 8:30:00 AM

this had to make me smile :) yummy sunlight indeed for the huge trees--I liked your approach to the photo very much, so unique good luck in the contest :)

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 11/21/2009 2:32:00 PM

good imagery, nice haiku, thanks for your comments C:

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/21/2009 2:20:00 PM

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Date: 11/21/2009 1:25:00 PM

Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. I really like the opening line. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen

Donna Golden

Date: 11/20/2009 5:53:00 PM

Lovely haiku, Brandee! Best of luck in the contest. Hugs, Donna

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/18/2009 4:32:00 PM

Thank you for starting my new day out with some excellent reading. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol

Lena Townsend

Date: 11/18/2009 12:25:00 AM

Food, excellent perspective. Very nicely done. Smiles from Lolita

Marty Owens

Date: 11/17/2009 9:18:00 PM

Nice Haiku...enjoyed...Marty