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Food for the Trees

piercing rays of light overwhelms the green giants in the old, dark woods

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/5/2010 9:15:00 PM
Nicely done. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/2/2010 3:32:00 PM
Congrats Brandee on your winning poem in Haiku You contest.. a wonderful write..enjoy your big win.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 6/2/2010 2:38:00 PM
congrats to you on your placement in my contest ~Rick~~Very nice
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Date: 12/1/2009 6:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your hm in the contest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/27/2009 11:37:00 AM
Congratulations Brandee, on your success Raul Moreno’s “Ascension” contest with this lovely haiku. (…Sorry to be so late. Don’t they say better late than never? I’m finally reading these winners. xoxoxox) . Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 11/26/2009 1:53:00 PM
Hey Brandee, Are you talking abort those giant redwood green giants? And oh how beautiful they are with the light shining though... As are southern forests as well. I enjoyed your haiku. Happy Thanksgiving. Love to you, Dane Ann
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Date: 11/25/2009 10:13:00 AM
Excellent Haiku Brandee, big congrats on your winning piece in Raul's contest >> James
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Date: 11/24/2009 11:40:00 PM
Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Brandee.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words & comments today.
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Date: 11/24/2009 2:16:00 PM
Brandee, I just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your win in Raul's contest to my other comment. Way to go! Enjoy your honor. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving! Karen
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Date: 11/24/2009 3:37:00 AM
Beautiful Haiky, dear Brandee. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 11/24/2009 3:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's Ascension contest Brandee. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/23/2009 11:17:00 PM
Congrats, Brandee, on your win in Raul's contest! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 11/23/2009 9:44:00 PM
Congrats, Brandee, on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. well deserved honor.. blessings ... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/23/2009 9:29:00 PM
Brandee, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul
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Date: 11/23/2009 8:39:00 AM
I am not a Haiku fan, but I liked this! Thanks for your comment on my poem. I talk to God every day; usually he's the only one listening to me!!! :) Mary
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Date: 11/22/2009 8:30:00 AM
this had to make me smile :) yummy sunlight indeed for the huge trees--I liked your approach to the photo very much, so unique good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 11/21/2009 2:32:00 PM
good imagery, nice haiku, thanks for your comments C:
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Date: 11/21/2009 2:20:00 PM
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Date: 11/21/2009 1:25:00 PM
Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. I really like the opening line. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 11/20/2009 5:53:00 PM
Lovely haiku, Brandee! Best of luck in the contest. Hugs, Donna
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Date: 11/18/2009 4:32:00 PM
Thank you for starting my new day out with some excellent reading. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/18/2009 12:25:00 AM
Food, excellent perspective. Very nicely done. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 11/17/2009 9:18:00 PM
Nice Haiku...enjoyed...Marty
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