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Fondling the Light

At last, the traffic comes to a halt… the quarter moon peeps between hill tops as a lingering sigh pinches my flesh— half weary, half shimmering in hours moist with late afternoon’s need for quietude. Clearing my mind to embrace sweet ardor's mist and the fire of gentle touches, I feel all the pinpoints of his affection tingling my softened face numbed by toil,hours before. Resting a bit to capture hints of stillness borne from the wake of a temporal star, we gather each other --- fondling the light, inhabiting the pleasure of now. ................... Contest: Laura Loo's Free Verse About Love-- New or Old Posted 1/12/2016

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Date: 1/21/2017 5:02:00 AM
Love is so constructive...like this one. Congrats nette.
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Date: 1/20/2017 10:25:00 PM
Love is always soothingly nourishing in both, chaos and silence. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/20/2017 7:40:00 PM
such stunning imagery Nette congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/20/2017 7:15:00 PM
beautiful poem Nette - Congrats on your placement :)
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Date: 1/20/2017 12:18:00 PM
sometimes the silence of love is all we crave, and when we are nourished we are satisfied. lovely poem for a lovely lady :) congrats and thank you :)-luloo
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Date: 1/26/2016 9:53:00 PM
Nette, congrats on your fine win. XOX - LINDA -
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Date: 1/20/2016 3:59:00 AM
Congrats Nette, on your beautiful verse and awesome WIN!!! ;-)
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Date: 1/17/2016 11:42:00 AM
It's a pleasure to read this. It makes me want to go into a hypnotic trance right now. For some reason, excluding all thoughts always brings a smile because the one thing that remains is that we are here.
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Date: 1/14/2016 9:40:00 PM
Nette, great pen congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/14/2016 9:17:00 PM
Nette, Congrats on your Into The Blue win. ** SKAT **
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Date: 1/14/2016 7:38:00 PM
Lovely, Nette. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/14/2016 7:06:00 PM
Nette, congrats on your placement in this contest! *smiles*
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Date: 1/14/2016 6:57:00 PM
I love this. Beautiful and touching imagery that really showcases your skills. Just lovely. Congrats on your placement ... CayCay
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Date: 1/14/2016 10:42:00 AM
Beautiful! Beautiful, sooooooo beautiful. #7 truly underrates this piece. Great work friend.
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Date: 1/13/2016 1:06:00 AM
Nicely written Nette, I really enjoyed this!! Best wishes Kevin
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Date: 1/12/2016 10:54:00 AM
Very lovely expression. Nette! And original metaphors,
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Date: 1/12/2016 4:54:00 AM
- A pleasure to read, as always Nette :) - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes & hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/12/2016 3:49:00 AM
beautiful, well written Nette...best of luck in the contest
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Date: 1/12/2016 3:10:00 AM
Oh wow, this is lovely. Great work here.
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Date: 1/12/2016 2:55:00 AM
You speak of a different kind of blue; I am inspired by the mellow touch of your brilliant poetry.
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Date: 1/12/2016 2:51:00 AM
I noticed that you've written about this time of day before, Nette. I like this too... restful and serene...Here's to new poetic heights!!! huggs
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