Vince Suzadail Jr. Poet Lyric

Follow the Nun

One day, She looked and saw what I done
For tomorrow is fine, now I’ll follow the Nun
She caught me acting up and having fun
She gave me detention, so I’ll follow the Nun

And now the time has come, to detention I’ll go
I will get a concussion and my poor rear end will hurt so
One day you’ll find that it’s no fun
When you stay after school and have to follow the Nun

And now the time has come, to detention I’ll go
I have a sore rear end, when I sit I hurt so, oh
One day, you’ll stay, and wait until I’m done
You can go home now cause today, I’ll follow the Nun

Beatles tune, "Follow The Sun"
For John's contest

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Andrea Dietrich April 7, 2010 at 3:11 PM Rereading this one here. It sure was cute!!

Sara Kendrick March 16, 2010 at 6:11 AM Did you have very much experience with this having to follow the Nun...Great idea..LOL...School days were sometimes very unpleasant..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Jimmy Anderson February 20, 2010 at 5:47 PM Hey Vince, congratulations on your win in the contest. ...Jimmy

John Freeman February 18, 2010 at 10:07 AM Congratulations on the 8 Vince, Sincere, Agape, Moses

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen February 16, 2010 at 9:52 AM Congratulations Vince, You did it well! Your BEATLEMANIA SING-ALONG poem is among the winners in the contest Sponsored by: John Heck! You did at great job with this fun poem. SMILES… Dane Ann

James Fraser February 11, 2010 at 3:02 PM Vince, many congratulations on your success in John's fine contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown February 8, 2010 at 11:21 AM Congratulations on your win in John's contest Vince. Love, Carol

Caroline Cécile Delacroix February 6, 2010 at 8:18 PM A cute and fun write, Vince! Congrats on your win. Best wishes, Caroline.

Andrea Dietrich February 6, 2010 at 3:39 PM I enjoyed this one, it had some really funny lines! congratulations, Vince!

Carrie Richards February 6, 2010 at 1:17 PM This was so fun to read again....you must have been full of the devil as a kid!! but what fun....in those "good old days"!! Congratulations on a great winning poem

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 6, 2010 at 12:51 PM Congrats Vince on your winning poem in the Beatlemania contest.. a great write and a wonderful win ... happy to be sharing the stage with u with my winning poem also.. luv.. and thankxxx for your blog comments and the recent blog u posted... GREAT..luv..Linda-Marie

Sara Kendrick January 26, 2010 at 10:22 AM Never been there or experienced that but sounds like getting in trouble with the principal way back years ago. Neat write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Good luck in the contest. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire January 20, 2010 at 11:00 AM How clever and original, Vince!! Love it and grew up in Catholic school myself so I got a kick out of the refrain..."I'll follow the Nun." Surely this will be a winner! Love, Carolyn

Audrey Haick January 18, 2010 at 9:50 PM Awesome write, Vince! I wish you good luck in John's "Beatlemania Song" Contest! Peace, Audrey

Carrie Richards January 18, 2010 at 12:56 PM Love it!!....I betcha you gave the nuns a run for their money!! Did they use a ruler for discipline?? Ouch!! Good luck Vince, and nice to see you back! ~ Carrie

Constance La France January 18, 2010 at 12:54 PM Funny.. but ouch... I went to a school run by nuns, not all of them liked kids, I think.. best of luck in the contest.