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Foggy Night

Mountains with white fog like steam in the Autumn trees A blanket, warming valley A yellow leaf fell in the gray, cool air settling Cold night captured it Heidi Sands 9/30/23

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/1/2023 6:09:00 AM

Lovely images, Heidi:)

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/1/2023 6:39:00 AM

Thank you Joanna :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/1/2023 4:42:00 AM

Moments beautifully captured my friend. I see the scene you so well depict, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/1/2023 6:40:00 AM

Thank you very much, my friend :)

Ink Empress

Date: 10/1/2023 2:03:00 AM

Beautiful sedoka, i dont remember the last time i wrote one, but yours flow with so much depth and warmth, of imagery painted in sheer eloquence, i love the opening and how you’ve described passing season, brilliant.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/1/2023 6:39:00 AM

Thank you very much. It is nice to see your comment :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 10/1/2023 1:19:00 AM

Very nice read! Have a wonderful season lovely Heidi ~AA

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/1/2023 6:38:00 AM

Thank you Abdullah. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 9/30/2023 9:05:00 PM

I used to not like winter, but lately I’ve come to appreciate its own natural beauty. And your beautiful poem reminds me of how fast winter is approaching. Stay warm my friend :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/1/2023 6:38:00 AM

Sane with me Akkina. I love the beautiful scenes in winter and the woodstove too . Thank you very much ;)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 9/30/2023 6:54:00 PM

Hello Heidi, Yes indeed, a sight and season for sore eyes. They come to life in your words, the fog too easily missed, along with those idyllic mountains. -Richard

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/30/2023 7:37:00 PM

Thank you. I appreciate your visit and comment, my friend :)