Foggy Night

Mountains with white fog
like steam in the Autumn trees
A blanket, warming valley

A yellow leaf fell
in the gray, cool air settling
Cold night captured it

Heidi Sands

9/30/23
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Daniel Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 6:09 AM
Lovely images, Heidi:)
Sands Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 6:39 AM
Thank you Joanna :)
Pandit Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 4:42 AM
Moments beautifully captured my friend. I see the scene you so well depict, Heidi.
Sands Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 6:40 AM
Thank you very much, my friend :)
Empress Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 2:03 AM
Beautiful sedoka, i dont remember the last time i wrote one, but yours flow with so much depth and warmth, of imagery painted in sheer eloquence, i love the opening and how you’ve described passing season, brilliant.
Sands Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 6:39 AM
Thank you very much. It is nice to see your comment :)
Alhemaidy Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 1:19 AM
Very nice read! Have a wonderful season lovely Heidi ~AA
Sands Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 6:38 AM
Thank you Abdullah. I appreciate your kind comment :)
Downing  Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 9:05 PM
I used to not like winter, but lately I’ve come to appreciate its own natural beauty. And your beautiful poem reminds me of how fast winter is approaching. Stay warm my friend :)
Sands Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 6:38 AM
Sane with me Akkina. I love the beautiful scenes in winter and the woodstove too . Thank you very much ;)
Theraven Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 6:54 PM
Hello Heidi, Yes indeed, a sight and season for sore eyes. They come to life in your words, the fog too easily missed, along with those idyllic mountains. -Richard
Sands Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 7:37 PM
Thank you. I appreciate your visit and comment, my friend :)
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