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Fog On the Hills

I am a man searching for a place. I turn about staring into a vista, just hence – just erased. The temperature nosedives while eyes wince. The congealing air grows muscles, a brawny blanketing. It is a young ghost needing to be revealed in the cold-sweat of existence, a fledgling elemental seeking form. I can’t help but feel that I am just coincidental, not any part of what’s happening here.

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Date: 3/2/2020 12:48:00 PM
Ooh awesome write! Enjoyed! xomo
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Eric Ashford
Date: 3/2/2020 1:01:00 PM
Thank you Maureen!

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