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Fog In Carmel

There, it was lying Among the school boys' ankles, Along the horizon of the blue, clear water Above the level of the concrete curb, On the narrow, packed downtown street. It had no scent, For which your nose could already sniff the salty air. It had no direction, Just swifting through the grey sky... But you imagine it leaves by noon? No. It's eternally there Along with the chill your pale skin receives, When you walk out your cottage door.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/8/2013 8:44:00 AM
Emily, ,,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* Skat *
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Date: 8/8/2013 2:51:00 AM
Hello new member Emily !- Well done, poem. :) - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/8/2013 12:00:00 AM
Hello Emily, pale skin. kind of xool and creepy, fog imagery... enjoyed -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@...
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Date: 8/7/2013 8:26:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this:) Welcome to PoetrySoup as well! - CMG
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