Fog Envelops

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The fog enveloped early morning Coating it with a silvery mist Even the golden leaves 'pon the magnolia Knew they had been sweetly kissed Bright sunlight tried to peek through But the clouds gathered around Closing off the laughter, tears dripped Slowly to the damp cold ground White pampas spikes stood still As a soldier in his watch No breeze to move the blossoms Or the earth adorned wristwatch

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/22/2018 3:37:00 PM

this has wonderful imagery, sara. One that I had happened to miss of yours. Happy Thanksgiving to you. I am at home alone I think I will go to Big Lots sale soon!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/22/2018 3:55:00 PM

Andrea, I hope you don't get stampeded at Big Lots with everyone trying to grab a sale item. LOL. No shopping for me today or tomorrow. Maybe the first of next week. I am sorry that you are alone but there will be a crowd at the store I am sure. Thanks for stopping by. Sara

Sherry Asbury

Date: 11/11/2018 10:04:00 AM

Hello Sarah...love your poem. It reads of the masters such as Dickenson. I am fascinated by fog and this was perfect!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/11/2018 11:07:00 AM

Sherry, I appreciate your kind review of my work. I am honored that you think and put in print that I compare to the masters like Emily Dickinson. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/11/2018 6:35:00 AM

I feel the emotion in this write! You make us feel the slowness of time and your poem flows with loveliness too.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/11/2018 8:49:00 AM

Kim, Thanks for the kind review of my work. I appreciate you dropping by. Your presence is uplifting. Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 11/9/2018 2:45:00 PM

beautiful write here, my friend - the watch in the pic looks kind of familiar, LOL. I see I placed in your last contest - no idea of my placement yet, but thanks very much x

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/11/2018 8:51:00 AM

Jack, I knew you would recognize the watch. Thanks for the kind review of my work. I appreciate you dropping by. Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 11/9/2018 1:20:00 PM

We have been having a lot of fog early morning here .. I hate it love your imagery , nicely done

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/11/2018 8:50:00 AM

Eve, I enjoy the fog but it is a danger if one is having to drive. I would not want it everyday. Thanks for dropping by. Sara