Fog Blessed Arms




Yes,let moist,these foggish arms of night devour me.

I am not a flower, dying in a scalding desert drought.

Holding back your love, doth far from sour me.

Your neglect, sends me to mentors, I dearly sought.

In my gullible insanity, I gave you high recognition.

And discovered for sheer greatness, I was wrought!

Not mediocre poetry, nor trophies as a solution.

Now,waltzing free God,bring me to my poetic fruition.

3/17/2023

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Theraven Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 5:00 PM
Panagiota, Still reign with music in your name, and 'Fog Blessed' in your muse. -Richard
Romios Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 6:10 PM
Thank you for connecting with me, a touching comment as I try to learn from masters in poetry. Have learned so far~ is that virtue of humility.. and reach to be grreat not mediocre in anything I post, create beauty and not conformity. A long road ahead. Hugs, Pangie xo
Edmonds  Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 7:04 AM
Pangie you reached poetic fruition long ago as true hearts know, be true to yourself, true to your words and remember to God you’re a poetess who brings joy to His world… Belle
Romios Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 11:32 AM
Golly, Belle. That’s quite a compliment. I never see myself as one who brings joy to this poetic community. I am hard on myself and critical. And yes, open but not enough for me. I never write-just to get something posted. I am glad to know you like my poetry. I am trying to improve….meaning be brazingly truthful. I don’t think I am anywhere near reaching the poetess I want to be. Meaning..fiery and bringing poets out of the darkness. Shallowness in poetry is a sin. This is our space to be anything but quiet. Inflation was no accident. Nor is rank, censorship. Some evil souls run countries. And we must address this.but who is brave enough? Hugs, Pangie xx
Wolf Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 8:56 PM
Sonnet-like stirrings here, my friend! Keep the Faith, Gershon
Romios Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 4:52 AM
Thank you. I would write a sonnet. Alas still catch on ti iambic pentameter. But that’s a high comment for me, Thank you.I like the idea of writing great poetry or none at all. Pangie xx Psangiexo
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace