Fog

My spirit is strong, my heart is weak. The only break I'd get is falling off a ladder. I smile to ease your heart, deep down I am without cause. You are at times my lighthouse, but often leaving me to drift into the fog.

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Carl Fraser

Date: 6/5/2016 11:04:00 PM

Hi Royal, There is always a cause, sometimes it takes years to find it. Keep sifting thru the fog and youll get there. Great verse. Blessings Carl

Len Gasun

Date: 6/4/2016 6:14:00 AM

Hello our dearest lovely Royal! There are times that heart grows weaker but a very uplifting spirit always resides in us. I hope and pray that your lighthouse will always be there for you sweetie. Loving this awesome poem and you my dearest young poet and friend. A7.Thanks a lot for sharing . Have a blessed weekend! Hugs to you, your 2 very cute ones, sis, bro. your Mom and everyone! love you all, GL

Jan Allison

Date: 5/27/2016 1:23:00 PM

I hope my lighthouse is there to guide me through the stormy times great metaphor Royal:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/26/2016 2:32:00 AM

Hello, Beautiful, sad to love and then drift alone. Your heart is strong, you can't feel it right now because everything you built around it's changing. (for the best) you don't need a lighthouse to show how strong you really are. I agree with Andrea, I love the ending metaphor. You know me, I love metaphors.... Love ya, <3 <3 <3 MOM <3 <3 <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2016 3:17:00 PM

I REALLY like this one, Royal!!! At times my lighthouse but often leaving me to drift into fog, that is a very cool metaphor!

Jesse Day

Date: 5/22/2016 5:29:00 PM

I love your poem - the description of the "ladder" sounds the alarm - wow! Excellent and intelligent.