Focus On Doing Better

Focus on doing better Have self-motivation Always believe that you can Be fierce with determination Set your sights high And weather the storm Keep on the alert Stay on the horn

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/26/2018 1:39:00 PM

Hello Brooklyn Six Project, this poem is an anazing read. I wrote this poem out withpen onto paper, I am putting this poem into one of my poetry books i read often. Have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/26/2018 5:49:00 PM

Instead i put this poem into my dictionary on the inside of the cover. I know it is there,and will read it often.I like reading your poetry.

The Brooklyn Six Project
Date: 3/26/2018 3:16:00 PM

Much appreciated Darlene!