Premiere Contest WinnerFlying On the Wings of Nostalgia

FLYING ON THE WINGS OF NOSTALGIA
I know the land where the lemon-trees flower, the flushing meadows in spring are flooded in color, the waves of morning mist rise from orchid valley floor, grazing the emerald hill-slope to the azure sky they soar. Drifting in time from my mooring far away with the painted memory not yet gray I want to fly on the wings of nostalgia to the land raised high in the Himalaya. The cascading brooks flow out of the snout of glaciers, the rhythm of their dance mountain’s swirling air shares. Along the chiseled contour as silver strips they meander in the lofty and terraced terrain where I used to wander. Drifting in time from my mooring far away with the painted memory not yet gray I want to fly on the wings of nostalgia to the land raised high in the Himalaya. Rows of rugged ridges merge in the horizon with the sky where the charcoal clouds gather, with wild wind they fly over the ever-green pine forest and melt there in torrent, the music of rain reaches the crescendo at each moment. Drifting in time from my mooring far away with the painted memory not yet gray I want to fly on the wings of nostalgia to the land raised high in the Himalaya. Piercing the rain-washed sky beneath the arc of rainbow the high peaks glow as the setting sun gleams on snow. With the moon beams silver dust falls in divine serenity I know the land where nature blooms in astral beauty. I want to fly on the wings of nostalgia to the land raised high in the Himalaya.
July 12, 2018 Contest : Pretty Poem Please Sponsored by : Julia Ward
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Mitra Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 9:12 PM
This poem is a treasure Subimal.. something that has inner beauty
Pappadogiannis Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 12:41 AM
Truly beautiful. Congratulations!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 2:46 AM
Thank you so much for your visit.
Smith Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 3:02 PM
Beautiful work Subimal, deserving hearty congratulations...
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 11:06 PM
Thank you, Charlie.
Haight Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 1:58 PM
Such a beautifully-written poem, Subimal, with lovely imagery. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place Trophy win! Hugs, Sandra
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 11:06 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra.
Ward Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 10:03 AM
The repeated couplet is very inspirational. Congratulations on receiving the trophy in my contest, Subimal.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 11:05 PM
Thank you, Julia for the placement.
Rowe Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 8:10 AM
You're use of metaphors in this piece is simply inspired. Such vivid imagery and flow to this poem! A well deserved win.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 11:05 PM
Thank you, Jesse for your visit and for the appreciation.
Dutta Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 6:50 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win top on your wonderful poem. Warm wishes
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 11:04 PM
Thank you for your visit.
Delaney Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 6:13 AM
Congratulations on your top place win. With this beautiful descriptive poem.sounds like a. Heaven on earth. SuZ
Gentry Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 5:17 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win! :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 11:04 PM
Thank you, Susan.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 4:28 AM
Congrats on your top win, Subimal! A beauty!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 11:04 PM
Thank you, Kim.
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