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Flying Off the Handle

The witches' ball met with a glitch
And tempers were raised to high pitch.
For all the brooms flew
And nobody knew
Just which switch was which witch's switch!

Halloween Lim - Old Or New Poetry Contest
Joseph May

11.10.20
Halloween Inspired Limerick Poetry Contest
Sponsor : Tania Kitchin


syllable count : 88558
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Miller Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 6:06 AM
Very nice! Congratulations
Allison Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 3:15 PM
this is so so clever Wendy and I reiterate how fabulous the title is:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 11:36 AM
Lol, Nicely penned Wendy, Congrats on your win
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 10:33 AM
oh, this is a very good one. Congrats for this amusing lim.
Y. Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 12:20 PM
Hi Wendy, You penned a good “ Halloween “ for the contest. The witches voice that you used to narrate the poem made it even better. Your last line was a good tongue twister! Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved . Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Watson Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 12:25 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed the role play! Thank you for taking the time to read and comment,Alexis.
Koplin Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 5:52 AM
I love the recording, Congrats on your win!!
Watson Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 12:25 PM
So pleased it tickled your fancy, Mark. Thank you!
Wolf Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 4:58 PM
This is GREAT FUN! Should be #1... Congrats on your win in the contest, Wendy. :) Gershon
Watson Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 12:26 PM
That's very kind of you,Gershon. I don't actually practise Halloween but can't resist a limerick!
Allison Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 4:14 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Wendy and the title is so clever:-) hugs Jan xx
Watson Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 12:28 PM
Thank you for noticing the pun in the title, Jan and I'm glad you appreciated it.
Fowler Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 12:43 PM
Love the narration Wendy! Congratulations on the win! Linda
Watson Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 12:28 PM
That's kind of you,Linda. Thanks for leaving positive feedback.
Kitchin Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 12:25 PM
Wendy, congratulations on your winning placement, this is a cute and clever one!
Watson Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 12:29 PM
I'm glad it appealed to your sense of humour, Tania. Thank you.
Leffanta Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 11:48 AM
Whose mother never took a switch to them? Aloha! Rico
Watson Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 7:15 AM
Thanks for reading and getting in touch, Rico.
Allison Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 4:19 PM
wow what clever word play inj the final line, good luck in the contest Wendy:-) hugs jan xx
Watson Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 1:13 AM
Thank you,Jan. I just hope that the meaning of 'switch' as a broom is understood by readers!
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