Flying High

Flying in the great blue sky, Like a grinning fool. Flying fast, and flying high; Didn't check the fuel.

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Constance La France

Date: 5/15/2015 3:22:00 PM

Isaiah, oops good idea to check the fuel, good one, loved the humour within your write and I want to thank you so much for my fine win in your Memories By The Sea contest, I am very honoured

Skat A

Date: 5/3/2015 9:55:00 PM

Isaiah, Congratulations on your Trochee poem win. :) SKAT

Paul Callus

Date: 5/2/2015 11:33:00 AM

High flying indeed, Isaiah!! Hope it can glide! Congrats on a lovely win. // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/2/2015 8:59:00 AM

This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara

John Lawless

Date: 5/2/2015 7:32:00 AM

OOPS....nice twist on the trochee.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/2/2015 6:40:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Isaiah:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rob Carmack

Date: 5/2/2015 2:59:00 AM

Isaiah, congrats.

Skat A

Date: 5/2/2015 12:42:00 AM

nice:) Congratulations! Forever ~SKAT~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/2/2015 12:40:00 AM

hahaha. I had seen this a while back and did not even realize at the time that I was looking at one of the 7/5 trochee entries. Anyway, I thought it looked familiar and I still love it! Congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/19/2015 12:32:00 AM

flying high like a fool, this quatrain's so COOL Hey, I have a question for ya. You said we could do triolet or sonnet in your contest but also it needs to be 20 lines or more. Do you mean I would need to do three triolet if I went that route then? Not just one? Please let me know. Would like to give your contest a try.