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Flying High - Visual 5

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Soaring Free as a bird No wings to restrain us Blown gently on salmon pink clouds Heaven! 01~11~15 Contest: An American Beauty – Andrea Dietrich Visual 5: Balloons Checked Using How many Syllables 2,4,6,8,2 ~awarded 4th place~

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Fred Chitanga

Date: 9/13/2015 10:26:00 AM

Yeah, nice peace

Jan Allison
Date: 9/13/2015 10:29:00 AM

Thanks Fred:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 6/9/2015 8:24:00 PM

Beautiful visual you brought to life a 7++

Jan Allison
Date: 6/10/2015 1:13:00 AM

Thanks Eve I do love this image - so calming and the colours are divine:-) Hugs jan xx

Peter Lewis Holmes

Date: 5/4/2015 6:53:00 PM

Light and airy Jan...nice write...btw...thanks for the comment...Peter

Jan Allison
Date: 5/5/2015 1:07:00 AM

Thanks so much Peter:-) Hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 2/1/2015 2:32:00 PM

JAN, CONGRATULATIONS on your win *Love Sweet* SKAT

Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2015 2:33:00 PM

Thanks Skat:-) Hugs Jan

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/28/2015 11:15:00 AM

Good for you Jan..Congrats on your win..I enjoyed your poem. BG

Jan Allison
Date: 1/29/2015 11:36:00 AM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Barbara:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/28/2015 9:56:00 AM

Coming back to congratulate you, Jan, on a wonderful win! Hugs, Rhonda

Jan Allison
Date: 1/29/2015 11:35:00 AM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Rhonda:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2015 3:45:00 PM

!!! : > )...Way to go..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 1/29/2015 11:35:00 AM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx

Abdul Malik

Date: 1/26/2015 2:36:00 PM

I wrote cinquain for visual 4 & 5. Then read yours and decided to go with 4! You did good. Congrats.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/29/2015 11:35:00 AM

Thanks so much Abdul:-) Hugs Jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 1/26/2015 12:13:00 PM

Hi Jan, just circling back with huge congratulations for your well-deserved win! warmest regards. Pandita

Jan Allison
Date: 1/29/2015 11:32:00 AM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Pandita:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/26/2015 10:26:00 AM

"salmon pink clouds " win for Jan. Love and regards from me Jan>rajat

Jan Allison
Date: 1/29/2015 11:32:00 AM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/26/2015 2:31:00 AM

Congrats my lovely friend on your win. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison
Date: 1/26/2015 2:33:00 AM

Thanks so much BL:-) Hugs Jan xx

Earl Schumacker

Date: 1/25/2015 7:48:00 PM

Hi Jan, Great poem. Great win. Very smooth and relaxing. Congratulations. Earl

Jan Allison
Date: 1/26/2015 1:38:00 AM

Thanks so much Earl:-) Hugs Jan x

Arlene Smith

Date: 1/25/2015 7:32:00 PM

What a happy day that will be when my soul ascends to heaven.. Congrats on a truly beautiful win, dear friend.. Hugs.. Arlene

Jan Allison
Date: 1/26/2015 1:37:00 AM

Thanks so much Arlene:-) Hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 1/25/2015 3:54:00 PM

Great write Jan...congrats on the win

Jan Allison
Date: 1/25/2015 3:59:00 PM

Thanks so much Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2015 3:37:00 PM

You were flying high with this one, Jan. The forth line is what wowed me. Just love the idea of the salmon pink clouds. LOVELY. Congrats and HAPPY BIRTHDAy to YOU.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/25/2015 3:39:00 PM

Thanks so much Andrea another win on my birthday I am on cloud 9:-) Hugs Jan xxx