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Flying High - Visual 5

Soaring
Free as a bird 
No wings to restrain us 
Blown gently on salmon pink clouds 
Heaven! 



01~11~15
Contest: An American Beauty – Andrea Dietrich
Visual 5: Balloons
Checked Using How many Syllables 2,4,6,8,2
~awarded 4th place~

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2015

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Fred Chitanga Date: 9/13/2015 10:26:00 AM Yeah, nice peace Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/13/2015 10:29:00 AM Thanks Fred:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper Date: 6/9/2015 8:24:00 PM Beautiful visual you brought to life a 7++ Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/10/2015 1:13:00 AM Thanks Eve I do love this image - so calming and the colours are divine:-) Hugs jan xx

Peter Lewis Holmes Date: 5/4/2015 6:53:00 PM Light and airy Jan...nice write...btw...thanks for the comment...Peter Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 5/5/2015 1:07:00 AM Thanks so much Peter:-) Hugs Jan xx

Skat A Date: 2/1/2015 2:32:00 PM JAN, CONGRATULATIONS on your win *Love Sweet* SKAT Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/1/2015 2:33:00 PM Thanks Skat:-) Hugs Jan

Barbara Gorelick Date: 1/28/2015 11:15:00 AM Good for you Jan..Congrats on your win..I enjoyed your poem. BG Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/29/2015 11:36:00 AM Thanks so much for the lovely comment Barbara:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 1/28/2015 9:56:00 AM Coming back to congratulate you, Jan, on a wonderful win! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/29/2015 11:35:00 AM Thanks so much for the lovely comment Rhonda:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/26/2015 3:45:00 PM !!! : > )...Way to go..Sara Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/29/2015 11:35:00 AM Thanks so much for the lovely comment Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx

Abdul Malik Date: 1/26/2015 2:36:00 PM I wrote cinquain for visual 4 & 5. Then read yours and decided to go with 4! You did good. Congrats. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/29/2015 11:35:00 AM Thanks so much Abdul:-) Hugs Jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 1/26/2015 12:13:00 PM Hi Jan, just circling back with huge congratulations for your well-deserved win! warmest regards. Pandita Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/29/2015 11:32:00 AM Thanks so much for the lovely comment Pandita:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 1/26/2015 10:26:00 AM "salmon pink clouds " win for Jan. Love and regards from me Jan>rajat Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/29/2015 11:32:00 AM Thanks so much for the lovely comment Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath Date: 1/26/2015 2:31:00 AM Congrats my lovely friend on your win. Loved always,bl Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/26/2015 2:33:00 AM Thanks so much BL:-) Hugs Jan xx

Earl Schumacker Date: 1/25/2015 7:48:00 PM Hi Jan, Great poem. Great win. Very smooth and relaxing. Congratulations. Earl Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/26/2015 1:38:00 AM Thanks so much Earl:-) Hugs Jan x

Arlene Smith Date: 1/25/2015 7:32:00 PM What a happy day that will be when my soul ascends to heaven.. Congrats on a truly beautiful win, dear friend.. Hugs.. Arlene Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/26/2015 1:37:00 AM Thanks so much Arlene:-) Hugs jan xx

Joseph May Date: 1/25/2015 3:54:00 PM Great write Jan...congrats on the win Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/25/2015 3:59:00 PM Thanks so much Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/25/2015 3:37:00 PM You were flying high with this one, Jan. The forth line is what wowed me. Just love the idea of the salmon pink clouds. LOVELY. Congrats and HAPPY BIRTHDAy to YOU. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/25/2015 3:39:00 PM Thanks so much Andrea another win on my birthday I am on cloud 9:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/25/2015 3:24:00 PM Lovely, congratulations. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/25/2015 3:26:00 PM Thanks so much Richard I feel I am in good company - we chose the same image:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight Date: 1/25/2015 3:14:00 PM Hi Jan, stopping back to say congratulations on your nice win for your inspiring cinquain. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/25/2015 3:18:00 PM Thanks so much Sandra:-) I enjoyed reading the winning poems:-) Hugs jan x

Paul Callus Date: 1/25/2015 2:23:00 PM So lovely to be able to come back with congrats on a very worthy winner, Jan!! Well done:) hugs // paul Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/25/2015 2:40:00 PM Many thanks Paul:-) Hugs jan xx

Marilyn Williams Date: 1/24/2015 10:59:00 AM Little, but just right. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/24/2015 12:02:00 PM Thanks Marilyn it has to fit within a certain syllable count for the contest glad you enjoyed it:-) Hugs Jan x

Joseph May Date: 1/23/2015 6:39:00 PM great write Jan....congrats on POTW Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/23/2015 7:36:00 PM Thanks so much Joseph:-)I am delighted with the honour:-) Hugs Jan xx

Robert Stoner Jr Date: 1/23/2015 9:55:00 AM congratulations Jan on Poem of the week,well done. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/23/2015 10:39:00 AM Many thanks Robert I was delighted to find out on Sunday:-) Hugs Jan x

Sandra Haight Date: 1/22/2015 11:09:00 AM Wonderful Cinquain, Jan! Congrats on it being selected Poem of the Week! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/23/2015 2:21:00 AM Thanks Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx

Neva Romaine Date: 1/22/2015 8:22:00 AM Hey Jan, congratulations on your poem being selected...a soft and sweet expression. Thanks for sharing..Neva Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/23/2015 2:21:00 AM Many thanks Neva:-) Hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 1/22/2015 2:41:00 AM I loved this poem Jan. Big congrats on having it honored as poem of the week! Hugs, Connie Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/23/2015 2:20:00 AM Thanks so much Connie:-) Hugs Jan x

Zakhe Michael Mcunu Date: 1/20/2015 4:06:00 PM SIMPLY GREAT... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/20/2015 4:16:00 PM Thanks so much Zakhe:-) Hugs Jan xxx

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