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Soaring Free as a bird No wings to restrain us Blown gently on salmon pink clouds Heaven! 01~11~15 Contest: An American Beauty – Andrea Dietrich Visual 5: Balloons Checked Using How many Syllables 2,4,6,8,2 ~awarded 4th place~

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Date: 9/13/2015 10:26:00 AM
Yeah, nice peace
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/13/2015 10:29:00 AM
Thanks Fred:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/9/2015 8:24:00 PM
Beautiful visual you brought to life a 7++
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/10/2015 1:13:00 AM
Thanks Eve I do love this image - so calming and the colours are divine:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 5/4/2015 6:53:00 PM
Light and airy Jan...nice write...btw...thanks for the comment...Peter
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Date: 5/5/2015 1:07:00 AM
Thanks so much Peter:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/1/2015 2:32:00 PM
JAN, CONGRATULATIONS on your win *Love Sweet* SKAT
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Date: 2/1/2015 2:33:00 PM
Thanks Skat:-) Hugs Jan
Date: 1/29/2015 7:30:00 PM
Yeah, this delights every time I read it.. A lovely winner, Jan.
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Date: 1/29/2015 7:34:00 PM
Thanks so much Dave:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/28/2015 11:15:00 AM
Good for you Jan..Congrats on your win..I enjoyed your poem. BG
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Date: 1/29/2015 11:36:00 AM
Thanks so much for the lovely comment Barbara:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/28/2015 9:56:00 AM
Coming back to congratulate you, Jan, on a wonderful win! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 1/29/2015 11:35:00 AM
Thanks so much for the lovely comment Rhonda:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/26/2015 3:45:00 PM
!!! : > )...Way to go..Sara
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Date: 1/29/2015 11:35:00 AM
Thanks so much for the lovely comment Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/26/2015 2:36:00 PM
I wrote cinquain for visual 4 & 5. Then read yours and decided to go with 4! You did good. Congrats.
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Date: 1/29/2015 11:35:00 AM
Thanks so much Abdul:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/26/2015 12:13:00 PM
Hi Jan, just circling back with huge congratulations for your well-deserved win! warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 1/29/2015 11:32:00 AM
Thanks so much for the lovely comment Pandita:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/26/2015 10:26:00 AM
"salmon pink clouds " win for Jan. Love and regards from me Jan>rajat
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Date: 1/29/2015 11:32:00 AM
Thanks so much for the lovely comment Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/26/2015 2:31:00 AM
Congrats my lovely friend on your win. Loved always,bl
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Date: 1/26/2015 2:33:00 AM
Thanks so much BL:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/25/2015 7:48:00 PM
Hi Jan, Great poem. Great win. Very smooth and relaxing. Congratulations. Earl
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Date: 1/26/2015 1:38:00 AM
Thanks so much Earl:-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 1/25/2015 7:32:00 PM
What a happy day that will be when my soul ascends to heaven.. Congrats on a truly beautiful win, dear friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 1/26/2015 1:37:00 AM
Thanks so much Arlene:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 1/25/2015 3:54:00 PM
Great write Jan...congrats on the win
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Date: 1/25/2015 3:59:00 PM
Thanks so much Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/25/2015 3:37:00 PM
You were flying high with this one, Jan. The forth line is what wowed me. Just love the idea of the salmon pink clouds. LOVELY. Congrats and HAPPY BIRTHDAy to YOU.
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Date: 1/25/2015 3:39:00 PM
Thanks so much Andrea another win on my birthday I am on cloud 9:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 1/25/2015 3:24:00 PM
Lovely, congratulations.
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Date: 1/25/2015 3:26:00 PM
Thanks so much Richard I feel I am in good company - we chose the same image:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/25/2015 3:14:00 PM
Hi Jan, stopping back to say congratulations on your nice win for your inspiring cinquain. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/25/2015 3:18:00 PM
Thanks so much Sandra:-) I enjoyed reading the winning poems:-) Hugs jan x
Date: 1/25/2015 2:27:00 PM
Congrats Jan.
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Date: 1/25/2015 2:40:00 PM
Thanks so much Rob:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/25/2015 2:23:00 PM
So lovely to be able to come back with congrats on a very worthy winner, Jan!! Well done:) hugs // paul
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Date: 1/25/2015 2:40:00 PM
Many thanks Paul:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 1/24/2015 10:59:00 AM
Little, but just right.
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Date: 1/24/2015 12:02:00 PM
Thanks Marilyn it has to fit within a certain syllable count for the contest glad you enjoyed it:-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 1/23/2015 11:23:00 PM
Jan, your write breathes freedom.. Oh, I feel that sweet release of flying through the air, majestic sky background.. Heaven in the real world!
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Date: 1/24/2015 3:17:00 AM
Thanks so much for the comments Dave:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/23/2015 11:24:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved Poem Of The Week!
Date: 1/23/2015 6:39:00 PM
great write Jan....congrats on POTW
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Date: 1/23/2015 7:36:00 PM
Thanks so much Joseph:-)I am delighted with the honour:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/23/2015 9:55:00 AM
congratulations Jan on Poem of the week,well done.
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Date: 1/23/2015 10:39:00 AM
Many thanks Robert I was delighted to find out on Sunday:-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 1/22/2015 11:09:00 AM
Wonderful Cinquain, Jan! Congrats on it being selected Poem of the Week! Hugs, Sandra
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/23/2015 2:21:00 AM
Thanks Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx
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